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Post by MTKnife on Oct 17, 2021 22:15:33 GMT -5
[Whoops, I didn't realized there'd been an update until I was presented with an officer in a steampunk dress--so the last couple of "280" typos actually apply to this update.]
In passenger missions, you can get a female "Baron". Maybe the language in ST is different but the other nobles titles use the usual English feminine forms, e.g. "Duchess" and "Princess", so this one should probably be "Baroness".
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Post by MTKnife on Oct 18, 2021 21:12:40 GMT -5
Toast for "Heavy Patrols" rumor:
"We must stay alert, this quadrant is...."
That comma should be a colon.
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Post by MTKnife on Oct 18, 2021 23:11:55 GMT -5
Dialog in the "Internal Pressure" mission:
"It is not secret that...."
That could technically be correct in English, but it would be awkward--it should probably be "a secret".
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Post by MTKnife on Oct 18, 2021 23:19:49 GMT -5
In a "Zendu Guidance" dialog:
"We've come at the bequest of Prince Michael Gunn...."
That should be either "request", or, if you want the formality for which Guun is famous, "We've come on behalf of...."
EDIT: Having gotten some sleep, I just realized you probably meant "We've come at the behest of...."
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Post by MTKnife on Oct 19, 2021 21:25:07 GMT -5
In the last "Zendu Guidance" dialog:
"One hold out will not be enough...."
That should be "holdout".
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Post by MTKnife on Oct 21, 2021 21:10:26 GMT -5
In the Exploration card "Siphon Fuel and Repair Ship," there's an extra space in there, I think within "to our".
Also, I may have reported this before, but whenever a mission has an Explore test, it says "a Explore" rather than "an Explore".
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Post by MTKnife on Oct 21, 2021 23:54:14 GMT -5
Toast for "Heavy Patrols":
"We must stay alert, this quadrant...."
That should be a colon instead of a comma, though a semi-colon or period would be fine as well.
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Post by fallen on Oct 22, 2021 14:16:04 GMT -5
Thx fixed.
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Post by MTKnife on Oct 22, 2021 20:10:25 GMT -5
"Diplomatic Delivery" option for the last step of "Mercantile Negotiation":
The negotiator's name is missing, between "hand" and "into".
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Post by MTKnife on Oct 23, 2021 0:55:21 GMT -5
There's still a "until he wears us down" in one of the Werewolf dialogs.
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Post by fallen on Nov 2, 2021 11:19:30 GMT -5
There are still on the list, sorry I missed them for #283.
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Post by fallen on Nov 16, 2021 10:20:33 GMT -5
All fixed in previous updates.
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