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Post by grävling on Jan 19, 2013 23:58:52 GMT -5
Moxa Trow
s/trust and free will/trust and good will/
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Post by grävling on Jan 20, 2013 0:26:01 GMT -5
Rumours
s/has shut down/has been shut down/
s/either due to availability/either due to inavailability/
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Post by grävling on Jan 20, 2013 0:33:33 GMT -5
Secured Tower:
Welcome to reception. ... key:
Repeats twice. The first time it should be somebody's name, I think.
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Post by grävling on Jan 22, 2013 1:10:31 GMT -5
Mercer
s/Its high profile/It's high-profile/ (note 2 changes)
s/me: 'no questions.'/me, 'No Questions'./
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Post by grävling on Jan 22, 2013 1:15:44 GMT -5
Operation Eastwind Niner
s/the case of the missing citizen/the case of the missing citizens/
s/Researching Facility/Research Facility/
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Post by grävling on Jan 22, 2013 1:35:58 GMT -5
At the Downtown Gateway Secure Terminal
The button is something like 'Time to hit this terminal, Kid'
But should be Kidd with 2 ds? Or better yet KB?
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Post by grävling on Jan 22, 2013 2:14:25 GMT -5
Internal monologue
s/ditched her Citizens Card/ditched her Citizen's Card/
s/its down to/it's down to/
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Post by grävling on Jan 22, 2013 2:18:42 GMT -5
Mama Riki
s/know you coming/know you would be coming/
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Post by grävling on Jan 22, 2013 3:25:26 GMT -5
Razors Joe
s/anymore time/any more time/
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Post by grävling on Jan 22, 2013 4:03:39 GMT -5
Mercer Happy
The line 'And I know you will continue to do so.' is said by Joshua. Either that is Mercer's line, or it should be 'And you know I will continue to do so.' if it is Joshua who is speaking.
s/if we have another big Operation come along/if another big Operation comes along/
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Post by grävling on Jan 22, 2013 4:12:23 GMT -5
Mallor (wrap up)
s/doubt it, Mallor/doubt it, Mallor./
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Post by grävling on Jan 22, 2013 7:04:58 GMT -5
Tunnel Guns
s/I said, It's too/I said, it's too/
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Post by grävling on Jan 22, 2013 7:15:17 GMT -5
Frederic Flynn
s/I run this section of the Tunnels for Mars/I run this sectin of the Tunnles for the Fennians/
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Post by grävling on Jan 22, 2013 8:14:13 GMT -5
At least one rumour talks of 'Los Valentines' not 'Los Valentinos'.
The same one talks of bonuses be handed out by the Connectors who are working _against_ a faction ... and this is wrong, it is the Connectors who are working _for_ the faction that are handing out the bonuses.
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Post by grävling on Jan 22, 2013 8:20:04 GMT -5
Frederic Flynn
s/combat training --- when it comes to combat. It's all real, chummer./combat training. When it comes to combat, it has to be real./
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