Post 9.13 typos now post 9.17

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Mallor

s/that I said it to your hyper-punk/that I said this to your hyper-punk/ (also we need to standardize -- Hyper-punk or Hyperpunk?)

and let you potentially get access to an item which can be life saving ???
I have no idea what this means. The only thing I think that 'Evade Block & Cover' which is what we are talking about here have to do about life saving items is that if you waste all your APs doing them you won't have any left over to open your inventory with so you can use that medpac or those stims. But you are advising them to remember to use them, not use them too much ... so ... I don't know what you mean here.

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Frederic Flynn
s/headed to the surface/heading to the surface/

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Luka in NBZ
s/next assignment./next assignment?/
s/at the bit.'/at the bit'./

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Mercer in NBZ
s/busy and in part because of the/busy, in part because the/ (note 3 fixes -- one is a comma)

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Cava Saint

1. I really would like it if we could get King's chip from Cava.

2. He starts off with 'You've come up another rung, Knight.' But this is your first rung if you have arrived in the NBZ, so not another.
s/come up another rung/come up a rung/ -- this will not hurt sandbox chars who do this the long way.

Also the backtalk -- what is my record with jobs doesn't make sense if you come to the NBZ with enough experience to immediately get this level.

Maybe having MnB hook into the Cava Saint ladder is a mistake, and MnB should just get his own ladder Connector. -- or a different ladder run by Cava?

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Kelly Brothers

1. The button 'I am here to introduce myself to the bosses' -- introduce is misspelt. Not sure what was there, and it's gone now, but it was not correct.

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In the walking map for 'Downtown' -- also the Taxi Map, and its Title when inside
s/Nemo's Resturant/Nemo's Restaurant/

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Happy Luka (after you return the Krofters)
s/in touch with Mercer and I/in touch with Mercer and me/

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Luka
s/with the Fennians work/with the Fennians who work/
s/are you kind of place/are your kind of place/