Post by Deleted on Jul 12, 2013 8:25:25 GMT -5
Right, it looks like I've got the wonderful job of starting the bug reports thread! 
'This high seas adventure RPG offers the dynamic and exciting world of Laanbrakar' → 'This high seas adventure RPG offers you the chance to enter the dynamic and exciting world of Laanbrakar'
'As the master and commander of a sailing ship, you are challenged to navigate the tricky political waters between nations on edge, deal with sorcerers and magic when you must, all while trading, bounty hunting or plundering to make a profit and keep your ship bristling with guns and your crew fed.' → 'As the master and commander of your sailing ship, you are challenged with navigating the tricky political waters between nations on edge, dealing with sorcerers and magic when you must and trading, bounty hunting or plundering to make a profit. Keep your ship bristling with guns and your crew well-fed!'
'Age of Pirates offers both a rich set of story driven
characters as well as an endless replay value in its sandbox mode which allows
you take any path you choose as a captain of a sailing ship. Your actions
affect the world around you as you grind enemy ports into dust with
bombardments, or trade a city back into prosperity by ending shortages.' → '
Age of Pirates offers both a rich set of story driven
characters as well as endless replay value in its sandbox mode, allowing
you take any path you choose as a captain of a sailing ship. Your actions
affect the world around you as you grind enemy ports into dust with
bombardments or end resources shortages through trade... bringing cities back into prosperity.'
'Our development team is actively continuing development and
updates based on your feedback and is regularly updated with new content,
features, and fixes. Please email us with suggestions or bugs!' →
'Our team is actively continuing development,
updating the game based on your feedback and regularly updating with new content,
features, and fixes. Please email us with suggestions or bugs!'
'This high seas adventure game will be a hit with fans of
Pirates of the Caribbean, Treasure Island, and Pirates of Dark Water. You are
the master and commander of your sailing ship and you rowdy crew of sea men and
pirates. Can you lead these men and women to glory and riches, turn a profit on
the high seas, and will your name join the greats among the most feared pirates
or more famous privateer in the seven seas?' →
'
This high seas adventure game will be a hit with fans of
Pirates of the Caribbean, Treasure Island, and Pirates of Dark Water. You are
the master of your sailing ship and your rowdy crew of sea men and
pirates. Can you lead these men and women to glory and riches, turning a profit on
the high seas? Will your name join the greats among the most feared pirates
and privateers ever to sail the seven seas?
Let me know if you need any more clarification!
'This high seas adventure RPG offers the dynamic and exciting world of Laanbrakar' → 'This high seas adventure RPG offers you the chance to enter the dynamic and exciting world of Laanbrakar'
'As the master and commander of a sailing ship, you are challenged to navigate the tricky political waters between nations on edge, deal with sorcerers and magic when you must, all while trading, bounty hunting or plundering to make a profit and keep your ship bristling with guns and your crew fed.' → 'As the master and commander of your sailing ship, you are challenged with navigating the tricky political waters between nations on edge, dealing with sorcerers and magic when you must and trading, bounty hunting or plundering to make a profit. Keep your ship bristling with guns and your crew well-fed!'
'Age of Pirates offers both a rich set of story driven
characters as well as an endless replay value in its sandbox mode which allows
you take any path you choose as a captain of a sailing ship. Your actions
affect the world around you as you grind enemy ports into dust with
bombardments, or trade a city back into prosperity by ending shortages.' → '
Age of Pirates offers both a rich set of story driven
characters as well as endless replay value in its sandbox mode, allowing
you take any path you choose as a captain of a sailing ship. Your actions
affect the world around you as you grind enemy ports into dust with
bombardments or end resources shortages through trade... bringing cities back into prosperity.'
'Our development team is actively continuing development and
updates based on your feedback and is regularly updated with new content,
features, and fixes. Please email us with suggestions or bugs!' →
'Our team is actively continuing development,
updating the game based on your feedback and regularly updating with new content,
features, and fixes. Please email us with suggestions or bugs!'
'This high seas adventure game will be a hit with fans of
Pirates of the Caribbean, Treasure Island, and Pirates of Dark Water. You are
the master and commander of your sailing ship and you rowdy crew of sea men and
pirates. Can you lead these men and women to glory and riches, turn a profit on
the high seas, and will your name join the greats among the most feared pirates
or more famous privateer in the seven seas?' →
'
This high seas adventure game will be a hit with fans of
Pirates of the Caribbean, Treasure Island, and Pirates of Dark Water. You are
the master of your sailing ship and your rowdy crew of sea men and
pirates. Can you lead these men and women to glory and riches, turning a profit on
the high seas? Will your name join the greats among the most feared pirates
and privateers ever to sail the seven seas?
Let me know if you need any more clarification!
