Post by grävling on Jul 18, 2013 6:24:15 GMT -5
The shoreline at XXX is not particularly safe, but now may be the time risk it if you have the feel of the dice
1 now may be the time TO risk it, s/the time risk/the time to risk/
2
'if you have the feel of the dice' doesn't really work.
'if you are feeling lucky' or 'if you feel that your luck is in' or 'if you feel that luck is smiling on you' would all work better.
1 now may be the time TO risk it, s/the time risk/the time to risk/
2
'if you have the feel of the dice' doesn't really work.
'if you are feeling lucky' or 'if you feel that your luck is in' or 'if you feel that luck is smiling on you' would all work better.
