v1.9.5 mission briefing: abandonded wraithbone

[raineman]

1. Suggestion: First sentance, replace "soldiers" with "knights". Reason: consistency - soldiers are a specific unit type, knights is all inclusive. We are learning how to move our scout and captain too!

2. Grammar: Third paragraph, first sentence.
get used to move/get used to moving

3. Grammar: Seventh paragraph, second sentence.
was outfit for/was outfitted for (past tense)

4. Grammar: Eighth paragraph, first sentence.
communication from/communication attempts from
Reason: there's no "communication" if there's no interaction/response.

5. Typo. Sixth paragraph, second sentence.
move all of or your/move all of your

[fallen]

raineman - thanks for the great detailed feedback and help cleaning up this region briefing! All done!

[raineman]

I'm a critical bastard, what can I say...
No, seriously though, just trying to help out. In no way should you assume my opinion is the law. Not a literature professor here, can't remember all the bloody rules with their multitudes of nonsensical exceptions! I am, however, educated and well read. Grammar and typo/spelling stuff just stand out to me.
Anyways, I'm glad to be not taken as an ass I'll continue to post my "edits". You two continue to produce my superlative entertainment

[fallen]

raineman - we appreciate the help. The community takes a huge part in enhancing our games in many ways - suggestions, feedback, bug reports, and typos