Post by raineman on Jan 31, 2014 20:56:08 GMT -5
Can't read full mission title on my little old phone(lg optimus). The title box stretches out under the yellow ui buttons. Not a big issue. Probably just my ghetto device :/
1. First paragraph, first sentence.
must hold agianst oncoming alien waves./must hold agAInst waves of oncoming aliens.
2. Third paragraph, second sentence.
are show in/are showN in
3. Third paragraph, third sentence.
and a xenos/and a xeno (singular)
4. Seventh paragraph, first sentence.
take control of the crafts/clarify; do you mean the craft as in ship or the ship's shuttles? Or perhaps they craft beer or weapons??
5. Eighth paragraph, first sentence.
the ships is/the ship is (singular)
6. Eleventh paragraph, first sentence.
hold against the xenos forces/hold against the xeno (or possessive xeno's) forces
1. First paragraph, first sentence.
must hold agianst oncoming alien waves./must hold agAInst waves of oncoming aliens.
2. Third paragraph, second sentence.
are show in/are showN in
3. Third paragraph, third sentence.
and a xenos/and a xeno (singular)
4. Seventh paragraph, first sentence.
take control of the crafts/clarify; do you mean the craft as in ship or the ship's shuttles? Or perhaps they craft beer or weapons??
5. Eighth paragraph, first sentence.
the ships is/the ship is (singular)
6. Eleventh paragraph, first sentence.
hold against the xenos forces/hold against the xeno (or possessive xeno's) forces
