Post by raineman on Feb 8, 2014 17:12:03 GMT -5
1. First paragraph, first sentence.
xenoS/xeno
2. Third paragraph, first sentence.
infested the long/infested long
3. Ninth paragraph, first sentence.
aliens, xenos,/ ummm aliens=xenos=xenoforms correct? Or are you intending that a "xeno" is a specific type of alien (like narvidian)?
4. Ninth paragraph, first sentence.
threaten makind/threaten maNkind
5. Ninth paragraph, second sentence.
here and now, in/here in
xenoS/xeno
2. Third paragraph, first sentence.
infested the long/infested long
3. Ninth paragraph, first sentence.
aliens, xenos,/ ummm aliens=xenos=xenoforms correct? Or are you intending that a "xeno" is a specific type of alien (like narvidian)?
4. Ninth paragraph, first sentence.
threaten makind/threaten maNkind
5. Ninth paragraph, second sentence.
here and now, in/here in
