Post by grävling on Apr 1, 2014 3:05:36 GMT -5
s/ot the Lighthouse/to the Lighthouse/
s/rise a Merchant/rise as a Merchant/
s/acquaintaince/acquaintance/
s/will be fank/will be frank/
s/Ruesland sung your praise/All Ruesland sang your praises/
s/sway him again/sway him with repetition/ (since you sure didn't sway him the first time.
)
s/kept quite/kept quiet/
s/wants only/only wants/
s/asside/aside/
s/reailze/realize/
s/a way, anyway/a way, any way/
(there may be others)
Also she soon starts addressing him as Nathaniel instead of Sveet. Wouldn't he take offence at that?
s/rise a Merchant/rise as a Merchant/
s/acquaintaince/acquaintance/
s/will be fank/will be frank/
s/Ruesland sung your praise/All Ruesland sang your praises/
s/sway him again/sway him with repetition/ (since you sure didn't sway him the first time.
)s/kept quite/kept quiet/
s/wants only/only wants/
s/asside/aside/
s/reailze/realize/
s/a way, anyway/a way, any way/
(there may be others)
Also she soon starts addressing him as Nathaniel instead of Sveet. Wouldn't he take offence at that?
