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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 4:32:00 GMT -5
AzTek Infiltrator Suit
s/Constructed of nanoceramic/Even though constructed of nanoceramic/
s/this type of body armor is still, however remains light/this type of body armour remains/
s/hinder an individual from running/hinder an individual when running/
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 5:00:10 GMT -5
Texas Roadhouse
s/got a bit of space a lot of options/a bit of space and a lot of/
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 5:19:41 GMT -5
Captain Malloy conversation:
s/I friend told me/A friend told me/
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 6:24:42 GMT -5
s/Oliver Garden Resturant/Oliver Garden Restaurant/
s/the worst resturant/the worst restaurant/
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 9:20:48 GMT -5
Safe Kate's Urban Shelter
s/over-populated and viscious/overpopulated and vicious/ (note 2 errors)
I am not sure you can describe a shelter as overpopulated, though -- overcrowded seems a better word. And shelters aren't vicious, it's the people in them that sometimes are.
I'd name the place Kate's Safe Urban Shelter, since it seems to be the Shelter that is safe, not Kate.
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 10:11:36 GMT -5
s/Secuire Yakashima Tech-Station/Secure Yakashima Tech-Station/
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 10:27:09 GMT -5
Getting the Yakuza pass to the HQ
s/hell show you/he'll show you/
s/Yah, lets go/Yah let's go/ (on the button)
(but this didn't get me to talk to a Yakuza boss, rats, guess it isn't written yet. If not, there is a bug. I just ended up in Downtown Yakashima section)
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 10:47:36 GMT -5
Finnigan's Parcel Delivery
s/You're shop looks like its centuries old./Your shop looks like it's centuries old./
(note 2 errors)
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 12:51:43 GMT -5
The Bungalow
s/youre in luck/you're in luck/
s/youve got here/you've got here/
s/youve been doing/you've been doing/
s/Hes know as Cognac Brawn/He's known as Cognac Brawn/
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 15:46:52 GMT -5
Introduction:
s/Im/I'm/
s/Thats where/That's where/
s/Ill be sleeping/I'll/ *grrr this font doesn't distinguish between capital I and lower case l
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Post by grävling on Oct 23, 2011 15:59:32 GMT -5
Independent Properties
s/would like to purchase a lease for in New Boston/would like to lease a dwelling in New Boston/
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Post by grävling on Oct 24, 2011 0:57:18 GMT -5
Agent Extreme description
s/and quickly, silent combat/and quick, silent combat/
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Post by grävling on Oct 24, 2011 1:59:34 GMT -5
Six Shooter Club
s/is neautral ground/is neutral ground/
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Post by grävling on Oct 24, 2011 4:17:13 GMT -5
All Nites Coffin Hotel
s/metroxplex/metroplex/
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Post by grävling on Oct 24, 2011 5:30:50 GMT -5
Back Bay Street Clinic
s/not your or any other Knights/not you or any other Knight/ (Note 2 errors)
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