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Post by grävling on Oct 27, 2011 21:45:47 GMT -5
Unified Research Inc
s/top notch/top-notch/
s/balstics/ballistics/
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Post by grävling on Oct 28, 2011 5:16:23 GMT -5
The Church of Faith, Fury, and Redeption[sic] still is looking for the missing 'm'
Maybe it's a flashing Neon Sign?
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Post by grävling on Oct 28, 2011 21:10:23 GMT -5
Backroom Pass
s/Church of Faith, Fury, Redemption/Church of Faith, Fury and Redemption/
Also, THERE IS A BUG with this thing. Once you get into the back room, you find a box of 50 pistol bullets, incorrectly labelled autorounds, and a belt of autorounds, incorrectly labelled pistol rounds. So, if you buy based on the text, and not the picture, you will buy the wrong sort of ammunition.
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Post by grävling on Oct 28, 2011 22:57:31 GMT -5
Conversation with Mrs Grim: s/That's right, chmmer/That's right chummer/ s/its all about loyalty/it's all about loyalty/ By the way, she still is giving out infinite jobs, and despite saying she wants me to help by rounding up some people, all I get is package missions, not capture ones. Her hair isn't ginger-red, either. Looks more flaming-red to me.  |
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Post by grävling on Oct 30, 2011 3:20:36 GMT -5
Finnigan's Parcel Delivery
s/like its centuries old/like it's centuries old/
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Post by grävling on Oct 30, 2011 3:36:26 GMT -5
Brave Star Offices (in River Park)
You have the incomplete sentence here:
Brave Star and by appointment only.
"We receive visitors by appointment only" perhaps?
Grävling
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Post by grävling on Oct 31, 2011 15:04:16 GMT -5
MT Chrome Fist
Replace the whole description with
Composite materials and nano-boosters make these powerfully reinforced combat gloves deadly. When wrapped around the hands of a trained combatant they are capable of either stunning or killing an enemy.
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Post by grävling on Nov 2, 2011 4:56:52 GMT -5
In the Laughing Dog Bar it still says: 'I looking for work* instead of 'I am looking for work'
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Post by grävling on Nov 2, 2011 15:09:26 GMT -5
Shattered Prayer Inn
s/every since/ever since/
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Post by grävling on Nov 20, 2011 5:39:52 GMT -5
Doctor Dave
s/living the Roxbury/living in the Roxbury/
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Post by grävling on Nov 24, 2011 0:05:03 GMT -5
5.1 Unified Metals Research
s/balistic/ballistic/
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Post by grävling on Nov 24, 2011 0:09:51 GMT -5
And Please change the sentence in the Laughing Dog Bar to say 'i am looking for' not 'I looking for'. This is likely the first building visited by a new user, and it's exceptionally bad to have a typo there. ALso, it is not clear that you are _handed_ Vinny the Rat's V-chip by the owner of the bar if Vinny is not there when you visit, which again happens if you go there the very first thing you do. I think it would be better if Vinny always was there the first time you visit the Laughing Dog, or indeed any time you visit until you ask about work, myself.
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Post by slayernz on Nov 24, 2011 0:53:42 GMT -5
Awesome finds Gravling  Exalt! |
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Post by fallen on Nov 24, 2011 13:24:38 GMT -5
grävling - all reported typos have been resolved again! thanks for the hard work!
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Post by grävling on Nov 24, 2011 16:20:03 GMT -5
Thank you. Let me know what release has all the fixes, so I know if I find one (even if I think I mentioned it before) that I should mention it again. For instance, the Refuse to Lose is still called the Refuse to Loose today, but I had said something about that before,,,,
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Exalt!
