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Post by piekl on May 12, 2014 18:51:03 GMT -5
I made the story so I figured I should post the first comment this was my first cyber knights story I hope to post a new installment every day but this might change over time I will try to post a update here
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I decided to write this because as far as I new no one ever wrote a story about a knight addicted to one of the street drugs available.
I always thought the knights probably have the most high streets job ever. How are they not all addicted to some sort of vice.
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Post by Jacob on May 12, 2014 18:58:26 GMT -5
Hmm. The first line pretty damn well sums it up. Could be interesting.
Although: Commas, Dots etc... Where are they? (Aight, might be because dat Knight is low on v-caps. Heh!)
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Post by Cory Trese on May 12, 2014 19:01:26 GMT -5
I am filled with questions. What was in this Knight's V-Caps that fried him out?
Corporate plot? Personal revenge? Ghost in the N-CPU?
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Post by bullgod on May 13, 2014 0:39:37 GMT -5
I'm now unsure on this knights new profession. If he's to screwed to shoot straight like a gunslinger and not even enough to be a cyber sword, who is he? Assuming the knight is male
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Post by piekl on May 13, 2014 0:56:45 GMT -5
Originaly a Gunsling but his addiction made it to hard to hold a gun steady so he became a Cybersword but such a bad one he thinks that he is not worthy of the title so he calls himself a brawler like he is a runner
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Post by bullgod on May 13, 2014 9:53:26 GMT -5
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on May 13, 2014 10:13:41 GMT -5
Pretty cool - I'm always interested in the stories of Knights. And yeah, I assumed the lack of punctuation was because the v-caps made his mind erratic and unstable.
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Post by Officer Genious on May 13, 2014 19:19:30 GMT -5
Pretty cool - I'm always interested in the stories of Knights. And yeah, I assumed the lack of punctuation was because the v-caps made his mind erratic and unstable. That's what I assumed too, especially when he mentioned that reading words made them jump around the page/screen/display whatever. Pretty cool to watch a former CK devolve into a drug-fueled Runner. I have a feeling things will get messy.  |
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Post by piekl on May 13, 2014 19:42:58 GMT -5
Yes the bad grammer is because of the v caps.
Also it will get messy real soon :-)
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Post by piekl on May 13, 2014 21:34:40 GMT -5
I plan to post a important part of the story tomorrow when I wake up hopefully at 7 unless I over sleep then I will post the second I wake up
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Post by Deleted on May 14, 2014 13:50:33 GMT -5
The journal entry approach makes me wonder if anyone has ever taken notes each time he played and used those notes to write a narrative journal to submit. That would be interesting, and you could really do it for many different games, especially turn based. Would be some work though.
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Post by bullgod on May 14, 2014 15:09:53 GMT -5
dayan my story (Lead, Steel and Chrome) has actually been written so far as it has happened in the game. I've played it as I write the story
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