Looks like it might be the start of a good political thriller. A few bits of advice.You're painting a picture with words. We have people, wctions, thoughts. Think about where they are. What it looks like, sounds and smells maybe. It doesn't have to be much, in fact a balance should be made. But these people have colonized or are in the process of colonizing alien worlds! Use them.
Last Edit: May 13, 2014 19:29:24 GMT -5 by Deleted
Post by contributor on May 22, 2014 11:49:50 GMT -5
Sorry I didn't see the comments thread. Deleted the other post
Thought you might be interested in this comment by Cory about the value of credits and their use. 50 credits for a taxi ride means you just got ripped off big time. You should fire Jenner out of a torpedo tube for not tipping you off. I think him and the cabby were working together to bilk you out of your creds.
Post by contributor on May 22, 2014 16:30:38 GMT -5
It's an honest mistake, that post is buried pretty deep, but I came across it researching for the other thread on quadrant history. Which I need to go back and put some time into. It's just hard with RL, Heroes and ST 4X.