Minor bugs in upgrades' descriptions

[grzechol]

Hi,

I've found some minor inconsistencies in the upgrades' descriptions.

Improved Canvas       +6 Sails, +1 Mast
Reinforced Masts      +4 Sail, +3 Mast
Improved Masts        +5 Mast, +2 Sails
Storm Sails           +2 Mast, +2 Sails
Reinforced Materials  +4 Sails, +4 Mast

Sometimes it's "Sail", sometimes it's "Sails". "Mast" is always singular - why? Also, i think the order should be always the same: "+x Sails, +x Mast" or "+x Mast, +x Sails".

There is additional requirement for all the Cannon Upgrades and Crew Weapon Upgrades: "This upgrade is only an option for a Naval Officer with sufficient Promotions". However, there is no such requirement for the Bi-level Gun Decks Hull Upgrade which adds +8 Cannons. I think it's a bit inconsistent.

There's a mistake in description of the Expanded Ship's Magazine Interior Upgrade: "to improve saftey" - should be: "to improve safety".

Improved Fore Sails   +15% Sail
Advanced Sail Plan    25% Sail

Perhaps it should be "+25% Sail"?

Interior Upgrades:
Additional Quarters (+20), Extended Crew Cabins (+10), Barracks Conversion (+20 / +30%), Cargo Lockers (+12, +5 Crew) - I think the numbers should be described (e.g. +10 Crew).

Mistake in description of the Grappling Hooks and Axes Crew Weapons Upgrade: "Award 'Imfamous Warrior'" - should be: "Award 'Infamous Warrior'"

Regards,
grzechol

[fallen]

I created #AOP-2619 to fix this set of typos! Thanks!

[fallen]

1) fixed ordering to be consistent.
2) Fixed plurality to be consistent (Sails, Mast, Keel, Cannons, etc).
3) Fixed the listed typos.

Thanks!

[grzechol]

Looks much better now, but I have a doubt about this:



Shouldn't it be "+4 Masts" (plural)? I'm just asking, I'm not a native English speaker so I'm not sure what's correct in this case...

[Officer Genious]

You're correct.

[fallen]

In this case, no. I corrected the inconsistency where it was previously Mast or Masts randomly, and now they all read "Mast". This is on purpose to indicate that you are not installing 4 more masts on your ship, but simply reinforcing the "Mast" rating on your ship. Now you've got me thinking we should change it to +2 Sail as well.

[grzechol]

It's complicated, because "Improved Fore Sails" upgrade "adds a set of sails to the ship's forward most mast". So it literally adds more sails.

I think descriptions are OK now, consistent and meaningful, so in my opinion wondering if it should be "sail" or "sails" is pointless

Great work