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Post by excalibur on Sept 2, 2014 16:18:23 GMT -5
Hi i'm new on these forums and this is my first CK Story. It is a tale of Violence and Betrayal. Sorry if my grammar isn't very good i don't have much experience writing on a kindle.
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Post by fallen on Sept 2, 2014 16:19:50 GMT -5
Hi i'm new on these forums and this is my first CK Story. It is a tale of Espionage, Violence and Betrayal. Sorry if my grammar isn't very good i don't have much experience writing on a kindle. Welcome to the forum! The best way to do a fan fiction is to post a thread with just the story in it, and start another thread that is "Comments on the <story xyz>" with a link to the story thread. This way, you're writing isn't interrupted by commentary! |
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Post by excalibur on Sept 2, 2014 16:33:13 GMT -5
Sweat runs down my brow. Mars had almost caught me. I look at the door. They probably will catch me anyway if they keep hitting it like that. I was smuggling a package to a yakuza safehouse on the other side of the mars territory. " Why couldn't we go the long way? " I say looking at my runner Yuesuf " Where is the fun in that? " He asks me in a sarcastic voice. I point to the door that is crawling with mars corp on the outside. " Is that what you call fun? " He stays silent. '' Let's go '' I say in a annoyed voice. I shoot the lock of the manhole cover. '' Sewers are you joking? " Yuesuf asks. '' Two options manhole or Mars'' Once again he stays silent. I slide down the ladder into the sewers. It stank but it was this or mars.
It dropped to the ground and heard something click continued onward for a second before I figure out what the noise it sounded like the cocking of an springfield .45 Pistol. Like the one yeusuf has.... I take my knife out it's chest holster and spin round elbowing the gun out his and cutting a straight line in his right are he seems to ignore it and grabs my wrist attempting to reverse the knife toward my throat I turn the move against him turning it to face his stomach. " Why? Yeusef why? " I ask him " The pay. I told you when we first met. If the money's good I do it. " he says while struggling against the knife. " You never did strike me as honorable" I stab him in the stomach and withdraw the knife knowing he would bleed out. Then I continue forward running this time.
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