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Post by excalibur on Sept 2, 2014 16:38:27 GMT -5
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Post by CdrPlatypus on Sept 3, 2014 3:09:35 GMT -5
Nice start. A runner being bought out to turn on a knight. A dive into the sewers. Looks like a good setup for some noir style drama.
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Post by excalibur on Sept 3, 2014 3:29:03 GMT -5
Thank you. Part 2 will be coming soon. If anyone has any ideas or corections about lore that I may have got wrong just say and i'll change it.
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Post by dragolord on Sept 21, 2014 14:50:11 GMT -5
Not to nitpick… but the CK shouldn't have a knife. They're banned in the Zone, and the nanoslag in the air degrades sharp edges ridiculously fast.
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