Typos in 1.2.11

[grävling]

s/Conflict Score/to the Conflict Score/

[grävling]

There are several problems here.

The first one is that a trade alliance isn't a conflict, so the intel we got isn't 'valuable to either side of the conflict', but valuable to either side of the alliance'. (But is it actually valuable? It's not as if it was a secret in the first place ....)

The other problem is:

s/Trade Alliance's engagement in the Steel Song/Steel Song's engagement in the Trade Alliance/

but again, the trade alliance is not _against_ Clan Javat, its _with_ them.

[grävling]

s/all all of/all of/

[grävling]

This is part of a different report, but I just noticed a typo. Sorry no red box, but it is on the right hand side.

s/bioloagical/biological/

And, if the excavation is what turned them up, then Excavations didn't 'begin immediately' -- they were already going on. Maybe you want 'Extraction began immediately'?

[grävling]

s/in a rushing/in a rush of/

[grävling]

You can infiltrate the ship. You can chew through the defenses. But you cannot glue those sentences together the way you tried to.

"Tiny parasitic fauna chewed through the defensive barrier and infiltrated the ship." perhaps?

[grävling]

Grrr. I have seen this card 4 times now, and still am yet to draw it.

'Uncovering' doesn't work here. We have to do the uncovering, not the colony or the find.
I think the 'find' goes with the artifacts and the 'uncovering' goes with the colony.

"We uncover a xeno colony and find spectacular, invaluable artifacts." perhaps?


Or if the 'spectacular find' is the xeno colony, then "A spectacular find of a xeno colony that yields invaluable artifacts" perhaps? That last is not a sentence, but we have a few cards with sentence fragments on them already, so ...

[grävling]

We did 'Mudslide' before -- except that I just looked it up and 'Mudslide' is one word.

s/invertebrate/invertebrates/
s/expeditions'/expedition's/

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s/packed our/packed them into our/

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s/beaches/breaches/

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s/task exploring/task of exploring/

[athios]

Forceful Inquiry mission
1.   Summary:   has great interest 'talking' to  ►  has great interest in 'speaking with'
2.   Step 1:   rigid military patrol  ►  persistent military patrol
3.   The summary and Step 1 description have 'spy' and 'spy captain' with no caps, but Step 2 and 3 descriptions have 'Captain' and 'Spy' capitalized. Not sure which way you want to go, but it should be kept consistent.


Forceful Inquiry post-combat mission result
1.   due to us at at later time  ►  due to us at a later time
2.   ship on ship  ►  ship-on-ship
3.   BUG: next step is not listed (return prisoner to Contact)


Forceful Inquiry final step choices
1.   Summary:   {Name} is rotting in a cell, now we must sneak the prisoner past local security  ►  {Name} is rotting in our prison cell while we figure out a way to sneak him|her past local security
2.   The Forged Papers text is missing a period at the end.


Targeted Officer mission, Orbital Taunts blockade card description
{Name}'s incoming ship, we plot a direct course of attack  ►  Spotting {Name}'s ship, we move in for the kill     (because this is a kill mission)


Blockade Enemy System mission, Blockade System card description
(current text)  ►  Trawling the system's orbit has disrupted its trade operations     (maybe could be rewritten better, but can't think of anything)


Prisoner of War mission
1.   Summary:  (add sentence) We must capture {Target Name} and bring him|her back to {Contact Name}.
2.   Step 2:   himself  ►  him
3.   Step 3:   on-going  ►  ongoing
4.   Step 4:   back and forth of retribution justice  ►  feud / vendetta / back and forth of retaliatory actions


Prisoner of War final step choices
1.   Public Procession:   ot  ►  to
2.   Security March:   (current text)  ►  We can deliver {Target Name} in chains to the local security officers at their headquarters.

[athios]

The query at the bottom is asking whether you want to set a waypoint to this quadrant. The prompting text is missing. Also, I assume 'No' and 'Cancel' do the exact same thing, so no need to have both there.

[grävling]

s/While protecting/By protecting/
s/strengtehend/strengthened/

but the real problem here is that I am doing a Javat mission to Patrol over a Javat world, and I am a clan Javat explorer, so it is not our allies who are being strengthened here, it's us.

So have we 'calmed local fears'? 'increased confidence in the Star Traders' Markets'? 'made the local authorities very happy'?

[grävling]

s/swathe/swath/ (swath is the noun. swathe is the verb.)