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Post by fallen on May 23, 2018 11:16:20 GMT -5
Thanks fixed!
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Post by daveal on May 26, 2018 22:11:11 GMT -5
Loving my assassileer. That is a pistoleer with non-stealth assassin skills. Poison blade vs slot 1, poison blade vs slot 2, then pistol to kill them both in one shot. But, the boarding skill has two small typos. Should be "a fleeting shadow" I think the assassin talent to kill a crew at the end is re-using the sniper message.
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Post by fallen on May 27, 2018 10:44:43 GMT -5
Thanks both fixed!
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athios
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Post by athios on May 28, 2018 14:19:53 GMT -5
Just looking on the Wiki at Assassin talents
First Blood: When making Initiative Roll in Crew Combat, front line enemy suffers terror from unseen opponent; -3 Initiative, -10% All Accuracy, -25% Parry, -10% Armor for 3 Turns, advances 1 slot; Requires Stealth Mode to use - I assume the advancing refers to the user, since it can only target frontline enemy. Maybe change it to "advances user/self 1 slot" - the name also doesn't really fit. Since this is a "threat" type debuff, there is no blood being drawn...
Gut the Leadership: After a successful Boarding, whirling shade strikes down a member of the enemy leadership; one enemy officer dies. If there is no officer to take the hit, the enemy Captain up to 30 + Stealth Skill Dmg
- missing word: deals the enemy Captain... or the enemy Captain takes
- if you are running short on text space, you could shorten "If there is no officer to take the hit" to "If there are no officers left"
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Post by fallen on May 28, 2018 15:25:47 GMT -5
athios - thank you! Fixed First Blood, it is too confusing to have it advance a slot and fixed the typo in Gut Leadership. Appreciated!
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Post by daveal on Jun 17, 2018 10:40:32 GMT -5
This thread is still pinned, but there are a few typos in the new plotlines in #72.
Tuko/Freidricks: "We have other business to which to attend, merchant". Possibly grammatically correct but awkward. Maybe, "We are busy with other tasks" or similar? "Then let's discuss the exact specifics of the mission". Same type of comment, maybe leave out "exact"? Later, the contact named Adine is mentioned, twice as "princess" and once as "prince". The wrong line is "Certainly, the prince Adine will want to hear of his true colors".
Damien Lumotte, in the Arbiter plotline, is referred twice as Damein: "And that, Damein, is the entire tawdry tale", "I have heard what you did for Prince Damein's trading network"
BTW, I love stumbling across new content like this. I started a new game to be Estelle's errand boy the whole way, which I had sort-of done once before. But this time, Guun refused me and Damien showed up, neither of which had happened before. Just as I was finishing with Damien, then Tuko showed up. This really enhances replayability!
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Post by fallen on Jun 17, 2018 13:28:59 GMT -5
Thanks I have unpinned this ancient thread from a long dead version.
Fixed all the typos.
Glad you're enjoying the way the proc-gen story picker works! It will work better and better the more stories we can load in. We are at 10 now, with a wide variety of lengths.
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