The Scent of Fear - comments

[beverage]

Getting into the swing of writing and thought I'd try a bit more of a lengthy tale.
Would appreciate and welcome feed back, criticism and encouragement of any sort.
TB's have created a great setting for fiction so thanks very much Andrew and Cory.

Cheers

[fallen]

beverage - thanks for sharing your creation in our world. I hope you continue, it reads great

[Cory Trese]

Thanks for sharing and contributing to the world of CK!

[rabidbite]

Apr 20, 2015 10:11:30 GMT -5 beverage said:

Getting into the swing of writing and thought I'd try a bit more of a lengthy tale.
Would appreciate and welcome feed back, criticism and encouragement of any sort.
TB's have created a great setting for fiction so thanks very much Andrew and Cory.

Cheers

Hi Beverage. First, I enjoyed the general feel to the story: the middle of a run and consequences.


Recently I wrote a post on the General Forums talking about common writing nuances that I inadvertently do. I think you'll find some good information in it.


startradersrpg.proboards.com/thread/11032/developing-writing-style





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