The Iron Warriors comment thread

[Brutus Aurelius]

So, any comments, questions, advice for The Iron Warriors Battleforce story? It will be based off of my Ironman difficulty Battle force. The link to the thread is here:
startradersrpg.proboards.com/thread/12614/iron-warriors-battleforce?page=1&scrollTo=144118

Please try to keep that thread clear so that it is easy to follow the story.

[Officer Genious]

HONOR AND GLORY BRUTUS! +1K

[fallen]

Nicely written! +1

[johndramey]

Very well written, I especially like how you are going through the tutorial with your characters. Plan on keeping up writing this way? It could be pretty cool to read through someone else's play through, haha.

[Brutus Aurelius]

Oct 28, 2015 3:25:29 GMT -5 johndramey said:

Very well written, I especially like how you are going through the tutorial with your characters. Plan on keeping up writing this way? It could be pretty cool to read through someone else's play through, haha.

I will continue this style of writing. I didn't just want to copy the dialogue down word for word though, so I usually try to put my own spin on it. 

[capthawk]

Really well written, much like I role play the scenario!
Hoping for more but that's all?