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Nov 9, 2011 23:35:59 GMT -5
Post by Cory Trese on Nov 9, 2011 23:35:59 GMT -5
thanks!
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blackgauntlet
Templar
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Nov 10, 2011 2:22:39 GMT -5
Post by blackgauntlet on Nov 10, 2011 2:22:39 GMT -5
I had to complete the Campaign once and return to the 1st mission again to find that one. ;D
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Nov 12, 2011 0:19:16 GMT -5
Post by slayernz on Nov 12, 2011 0:19:16 GMT -5
Happy to go through the strings like STRPG Cory. I've seen a few strings that are errant, and would be more than happy to review  |
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Nov 25, 2011 5:06:13 GMT -5
Post by Rico's Roughnecks on Nov 25, 2011 5:06:13 GMT -5
Moons campaign, first mission while approaching the goal line via the bottommost tunnel a trooper says "the entry point IF/is just ahead"
Moon campaign second mission, approaching the exit trooper says "we must hope the two security switches are will allow access". Delete 'are'
Moon, mission three briefing. "Invariably" spelled wrong
In the help file, the formula for cp says (quick+tactic)/3+3 but the game behaves as tho the formula is (quick+tactics)/3+4.
Sorry. This thread makes me feel like a critical jerk.
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Nov 25, 2011 12:48:05 GMT -5
Post by fallen on Nov 25, 2011 12:48:05 GMT -5
@ricos - dont feel bad. thats what the thread is for. We have heard many times that our endless stream of grammar mistakes (Cory and I are bad at spelling AND grammar) knocks people out of immersion with the game. That is really important to us, but its hard for us to find all of our own issues.
We appreciate it.
The next release will fixes to all your listed issues.
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Nov 26, 2011 2:44:42 GMT -5
Post by Rico's Roughnecks on Nov 26, 2011 2:44:42 GMT -5
Well if you insist...
Moons, mission 4 the first conversation point a trooper tells the scouts "may your return to dark rain be hasty?" Remove question mark
Moons, drop zone briefing. "Captain and crew have clearly meddle in..." should be meddled, past tense. Also, guarantee misspelled.
Drop zone, conversation before entering the long tunnel. Rogue captain says "unleash up all the worlds" should be upon
Drop zone, conversation at the bend in long tunnel. Templar says "sounds like THIS may have found what they were seeking" should be THEY
Drop zone, conversation where they enter egg room... spelled AMALGAMATION correctly! (I thought you could use some good news for a change)
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Nov 27, 2011 7:40:22 GMT -5
Post by Rico's Roughnecks on Nov 27, 2011 7:40:22 GMT -5
Two in the debriefing for deep moon core. There's a "has has" doubled up, and in the next paragraph there are a few too many words... its been a couple hours so I don't remember exactly but its like "if it are is will to be" or something, you'll see if it you read it.
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Nov 28, 2011 8:17:23 GMT -5
Post by Rico's Roughnecks on Nov 28, 2011 8:17:23 GMT -5
Secrets of endivus debriefing, "anomalies" spelled wrong
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Nov 28, 2011 11:28:06 GMT -5
Post by fallen on Nov 28, 2011 11:28:06 GMT -5
@ricos - thanks for your help! all of the edits are resolved and will be in the release after 0.2.9. We could not have proper English in any of our games without a dedicated community!
Also, thanks for the kudos on my spelling of AMALGAMATION =) I took extra time with that one!
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Dec 3, 2011 21:25:20 GMT -5
Post by Rico's Roughnecks on Dec 3, 2011 21:25:20 GMT -5
Rifts, mission 2 debriefing: "void engine" should be plural
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Dec 3, 2011 23:34:50 GMT -5
Post by Rico's Roughnecks on Dec 3, 2011 23:34:50 GMT -5
Description for heavy leviathan. "Addition" should be additional. Also, it says its built with an additional sight but its actually less accurate.
For light leviathan, "build with a smaller clip" should be built... except then you have the word "built" twice in the same sentance which sounds a little odd.
I still feel bad about being the grammar police
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Dec 4, 2011 0:09:58 GMT -5
Post by fallen on Dec 4, 2011 0:09:58 GMT -5
@ricos - please continue. All reported issues have been resolved for the release after 0.2.11
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Dec 4, 2011 0:30:37 GMT -5
Post by Rico's Roughnecks on Dec 4, 2011 0:30:37 GMT -5
Rifts, mission 3. The briefing doesn't tell you that you need to activate the switches to proceed. The graphic shows the switches in yellow and the goal in green and I didn't have any trouble figuring it out the first time I played it, but it probably should be spelled out.
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Dec 4, 2011 8:56:26 GMT -5
Post by Rico's Roughnecks on Dec 4, 2011 8:56:26 GMT -5
Rifts, mission 4 briefing. " the two sysytem relays that powers the bridge" should just be power
Mission 4 approaching the bridge. "Command docks" should be decks. And "ship's upgrade" should be upgrades.
"Taking the bridge" the briefing map doesn't show you where the bridge is
Taking the bridge debriefing, "is no docking or urban zones" should be are no
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Dec 5, 2011 9:38:42 GMT -5
Post by Rico's Roughnecks on Dec 5, 2011 9:38:42 GMT -5
Carfix, mission 1 debriefing... "brough online" should be brought
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