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Post by richard on Sept 11, 2017 12:00:32 GMT -5
great picture
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Post by fallen on Sept 11, 2017 12:11:42 GMT -5
Thank you! I was very happy about how the composition turned out and the scaling. Next up -- introducing Argus and getting the hell of this world! |
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Post by fallen on Sept 13, 2017 0:21:56 GMT -5
Ok, so I am about to write the first dialog for Officer Argus 'duct-tape' Rawlins. His character bio, as voted in by the Patreons, focuses a good deal on his thick accent and crazy sense of humor.
I have the following lines of dialog that I need to turn into Argus speech, suggestions welcome! I've written them very simply.
<sleeping> Huh?
<woke up> Yeah, I'm here.
<hasn't been fixing it, been napping> It's almost fixed.
<leaps into motion> Give me a minute, almost done here!
From his crew bio:
- From the world of Mettsa Prime, and bears its incredibly thick accent, at times almost unintelligible
- Argus is a thesaurus of profanities and hilarious jokes from all over the Quadrant. Whether its the joke itself or his unintelligible but musical accent, he is always entertaining the crew.
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Post by richard on Sept 13, 2017 12:22:11 GMT -5
<leaps into motion>
with a hand-off occurring, he should be fixing something for take-off
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Post by fallen on Sept 13, 2017 12:24:45 GMT -5
<leaps into motion> with a hand-off occurring, he should be fixing something for take-off Yes -- sorry, to give context to the dialog. He's waking up from an unintentional nap. He was working on something that needed fixing. He's going to fix it really fast now. Cursing all the way, I guess  |
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Post by stratego on Oct 4, 2017 14:48:16 GMT -5
*sings* oh month has passed by like a snap*sings*😉
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Post by fallen on Oct 4, 2017 15:50:25 GMT -5
stratego - was moving pretty well on this, but honestly had to put it aside for a minute while we finish Star Traders: Frontiers. Hopefully I will get back to it again. It's been my late night "go to" when I am too tired to work on anything else, so hopefully I can get back there. I will try coffee and see if it works. Thought about joining us on Patreon to help support?
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Post by stratego on Oct 5, 2017 2:54:44 GMT -5
stratego - was moving pretty well on this, but honestly had to put it aside for a minute while we finish Star Traders: Frontiers. Hopefully I will get back to it again. It's been my late night "go to" when I am too tired to work on anything else, so hopefully I can get back there. I will try coffee and see if it works. Thought about joining us on Patreon to help support? Yeah, but you know how it is with tech students life, you never have money😉 |
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Post by fallen on Oct 28, 2017 0:01:59 GMT -5
 Feeling rusty here, but excited to show Argus in his "element" and Apone back on the scene barking some orders from the bridge. I'm hoping that we'll see 2-3 pages to go before the crew is off Lioka Cross and in the void, ready for something new. Sorry for the long delay between pages -- but Star Traders: Frontiers has completely taken over my days and nights. If you're a Patreon -- I hope you're playing and enjoying the fruits of our labor there. |
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Post by Brutus Aurelius on Oct 28, 2017 6:47:37 GMT -5
Looking good! I don't think you're rusty Andrew  |
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Post by fallen on Oct 28, 2017 9:19:38 GMT -5
Looking good! I don't think you're rusty Andrew Lol, thanks! I think its more a long-time-off thing  |
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Post by ntsheep on Oct 28, 2017 10:46:42 GMT -5
fallen, careful scanning with the latest digisheep technology finds that though this page is a Black and White color format, none of the varying shades of grey indicate "rust"
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Post by fallen on Oct 28, 2017 14:06:35 GMT -5
fallen, careful scanning with the latest digisheep technology finds that though this page is a Black and White color format, none of the varying shades of grey indicate "rust" Actually funny how color creeps into the pages. I have to B/W filter them on the way out. Argus lives in a properly messy environment -- maybe you can find rust in there! |
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Post by En1gma on Oct 28, 2017 19:17:07 GMT -5
Is there a display issue with the previous two panels? I'm not seeing them
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Post by fallen on Oct 28, 2017 22:15:25 GMT -5
Is there a display issue with the previous two panels? I'm not seeing them Where are you looking? They are all visible in the OP for me, but we might be looking in different places. |
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