The Adventures of Captain Roach: Comments

[Officer Genious]

@wascalywabbit, I finally watched that video (I kept forgetting). It fits perfectly, thank you.

ntsheep, I didn't even post anything but my rants and screaming, but hey, if that's what you're into. XD

Also wanted to say that I'm at 15+ pages now and its looking to be closer to 25 by the time I finally type everything up and do some more editing (seriously, my ending is terrible). I printed it out and ran out of paper twice. XD!

[ntsheep]

You posted parts of the story. We all need someone to rant and scream to at times and you came here to us. You've liked and commented on our stories and thoughts and posted things to help out. I am a sheep that roams the digital realms. When I find you sitting in a pasture some where, I consider myself lucky

[Officer Genious]

D'aww, you're too much sheep. Thank you again, I'm going to shut up and get back to my story. I plan on finishing the typing process today so I can do some heavy writing either tonight or tomorrow (or the next day, so on...). I'm ready to get this story done and work on the next project using some different methods. CK, I'm coming for YOU!!

[ntsheep]

I would love to see you take a stab at a CK story.

[Officer Genious]

Mar 16, 2017 13:27:52 GMT -5 ntsheep said:

I would love to see you take a stab at a CK story.

I believe you mean a cyberclaw at it. I was going to write about the creation of a Dronemaster, but honestly I don't feel like its a particularly good story. One about the daily life of an enforcer might be more interesting...

I also finished typing up most of my notes and I'm at almost 30 pages (lolwut, I actually cut like two chapters out!) without being quite done yet. I still have a lot of description to add, a chapter to create in the rising action I simply forgot about and a half-baked ending that needs fixing too. I wanted a short story, not a damn mini-novel. T.T Oh well, back to work I guess...

[ntsheep]

How about the daily adventures of Officer Genious of Bravestar.