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Post by grävling on Feb 19, 2013 10:24:24 GMT -5
Caroln Park Apartments (in Commonwealth)
are Carolawn Park Apartments inside the building.
Edit: present in 9,27 (for real)
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Post by grävling on Feb 19, 2013 10:26:13 GMT -5
Lt Simon
s/Have you met with/Have you Connected with/ (as we never actually get to meet)
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Post by grävling on Feb 19, 2013 11:01:38 GMT -5
Rumour Text:
The Connectors working against <faction name> are paying some serious bonuses right now as Cyber Knights are in such high demand.
s/against/for/ (because that is what is really happening)
Please change this one, it is driving me nuts!
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Post by grävling on Feb 19, 2013 11:37:52 GMT -5
Luka
s/You must you acquire/You must first acquire/
s/and be constantly be/and then be constantly/
Edit: even with the correct new version, these errors are still present.
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Post by grävling on Feb 19, 2013 11:55:08 GMT -5
Frederic Flynn
< error removed as you did fix this one, I just didn't have the update >
I still think that reversing the order of the
'I heard Max was going' screen that is your second with Frederic in your first conversation with the 'I am Frederic' that is your first screen in your first conversation makes the conversation flow better.
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Post by grävling on Feb 19, 2013 12:01:27 GMT -5
More Frederic Flynn
s/'What's next?/'What's next?'
missing single quote. Or remove the existing one.
< rest deleted because this was my fault, the changes were there. >
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Post by grävling on Feb 19, 2013 12:12:23 GMT -5
Sawed -off Shotgun description title
s/Sawed -off/Sawed-off/ (there is an unwanted space in the title)
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Post by grävling on Feb 19, 2013 12:29:19 GMT -5
Mallor True
s/with fewer than 6 HP and MP/with fewer than 6 HP or MP/
edit: Still present in 2.27
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Post by grävling on Feb 19, 2013 15:47:18 GMT -5
Vault.
FALLEN!
EXACTLY WHAT PART OF 'get out of dodge' -> 'get out of Dodge'
DO YOU NOT UNDERSTAND?
3 times now you have said this is fixed, and the lower case 'd' is STILL THERE.
Edit: Well, just by luck, it turns out that I don't owe you any grovelling for this one. 9,27 and the lower case 'd' is _still there_ indeed.
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ncaoa
Templar
Getting killed by Deathkin. Again.
Posts: 972 
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Post by ncaoa on Feb 19, 2013 16:18:20 GMT -5
Vault. FALLEN! EXACTLY WHAT PART OF 'get out of dodge' -> 'get out of Dodge' DO YOU NOT UNDERSTAND? 3 times now you have said this is fixed, and the lower case 'd' is STILL THERE. Excuse me for laughing at the thought of a giant Badger attacking Fallen ;D |
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Post by grävling on Feb 19, 2013 20:00:11 GMT -5
sorry about that ...
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ncaoa
Templar
Getting killed by Deathkin. Again.
Posts: 972
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Post by ncaoa on Feb 19, 2013 20:01:12 GMT -5
? About what?
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Post by grävling on Feb 19, 2013 20:38:48 GMT -5
I didn't really mean to savage Fallen.  |
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ncaoa
Templar
Getting killed by Deathkin. Again.
Posts: 972
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Post by ncaoa on Feb 19, 2013 21:20:03 GMT -5
I didn't really mean to savage Fallen. lol |
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Post by grävling on Feb 19, 2013 22:31:19 GMT -5
Luka
s/with the Fennians work/with the Fennians who work/
(internal monologue)
s/their 'owning me.'/'owning me'./
edit: Still present in 2.27
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