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[paxdad]

May 28, 2013 8:19:45 GMT -5 Jamozk Ekhiss said:

Don't worry about it - it's not been nearly as long as some gaps between my posts on another forum (it's probably been about 5 months now in one of mine).

Lol...I feel better then ;D

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[rabidbite]

May 28, 2013 8:19:45 GMT -5 Jamozk Ekhiss said:

Don't worry about it - it's not been nearly as long as some gaps between my posts on another forum (it's probably been about 5 months now in one of mine).

If I understand this statement correctly, you do some amateur writing? Do you mind pointing me to it?


And Paxdad, don't make me get Gravling. She will chew you until you write something and then correct your spelling errors with a kind warmth that will have you feeling so guilty you'll obsess about every dot and comma.

(I so hope she reads this. She's been a little absent lately.)

rabid

[paxdad]

LOL ;D

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[paxdad]

Added a mini chapter. Introducing a new character...Dixon. I was originally going to make this an into to the next "real" chapter but didn't want make the next one overly long, in the spirit of forum fiction. Also since I have had a lot of demands on my time lately. I decided to throw you guys a bone!

[rabidbite]

Damn Pax, I truly envy how EASY the tech-side of your vision seems. I wish I could write it that well. +1 Kudos.

[paxdad]

Jul 27, 2013 9:02:36 GMT -5 rabidbite said:

Damn Pax, I truly envy how EASY the tech-side of your vision seems. I wish I could write it that well. +1 Kudos.

Thank you very much @rabid! I appreciate your comment very much. Considering it took about 2 & 1/2 months to get out just that little piece I am not sure I would agree with you but it is much appreciated none the less.

[rabidbite]

Jul 31, 2013 18:56:46 GMT -5 paxdad said:

Jul 27, 2013 9:02:36 GMT -5 rabidbite said:

Damn Pax, I truly envy how EASY the tech-side of your vision seems. I wish I could write it that well. +1 Kudos.

Thank you very much @rabid! I appreciate your comment very much. Considering it took about 2 & 1/2 months to get out just that little piece I am not sure I would agree with you but it is much appreciated none the less.

I didn't mean that the effort was easy, I meant that the 'flow' of the concept behind the tech-side feels smooth. It fits. Thus, it is 'easy' to read.

Not sure if I explain it right, even now, but I hope you get the gist of it


rabid

[paxdad]

@rabid that was mostly me trying be humble. :-) I get what you're saying. Thank you again. It is a very nice compliment. Hopefully I can keep it up.

Returning to DAT in the Matrix next and while I have been extremely busy I think I have been subconsciously avoiding it a little, lol. My biggest concern is being repetitive in my descriptions and getting stale :-)

I was breaking down the next chapter a bit in my mind this weekend and was pretty excited about where it was going, hopefully you will all enjoy it too, once I finally bring it to fruition. :-)



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[Jamozk Ekhiss]

Oh, tales of the Matrix could never get stale (at least for me)...

[paxdad]

Ok I am back in the Matrix and the spice is flowing...
"Long live the fighters!"

Progress bar is starting to fill

[paxdad]

I am excited to be working on the final edit of the next chapter!

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[rabidbite]

Great

[paxdad]

Part 4 is live! I hope people enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it. I am very please with how it turned out. I also updated chapter 3. Location was changed, and some minor cohesion adjustments were made.

I wonder if the characters personalities are coming through on paper the way I see them in my head... I will never know but I hope you are finding them compelling and unique in some way.

[rabidbite]

Should honestly write more Pax. I think you like it.

[Jamozk Ekhiss]

That was epic. I'm trying to think of a more useful way of phrasing that, but I can't. It was just epic.