Jamozk Ekhiss
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Oct 1, 2013 11:59:42 GMT -5
Comments thread for In the Net, my new story thread started hereAny feedback welcome! |
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Post by Officer Genious on Nov 3, 2013 21:21:26 GMT -5
I like this, write me some more- MOAR I SAYYY!!!
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Nov 4, 2013 11:07:25 GMT -5
Thanks!
Some ideas came to me yesterday on how to continue - I'll get writing now, before they leave me.
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Post by fallen on Nov 4, 2013 11:54:09 GMT -5
Thanks! Some ideas came to me yesterday on how to continue - I'll get writing now, before they leave me. Great work! Keep it coming! Shared out your works to our social network. |
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Post by Officer Genious on Nov 4, 2013 15:23:58 GMT -5
Thanks! Some ideas came to me yesterday on how to continue - I'll get writing now, before they leave me. Read it and waiting to see what's going on- question: are these logs from the character's head? Like instant brain messaging? |
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Nov 4, 2013 16:01:57 GMT -5
I think these are the sort of "black box" logs in the character's head, intended as backups in case their memory was wiped (their brain is partially digitised - it makes accessing memories faster, and it allows direct digital download).
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Post by Jacob on Nov 4, 2013 16:28:25 GMT -5
I want more... CK, a charger, lots of free time, 2 good novels to read (Cerberus and yours) and some beer and coffee, what else do I need?  Sent from my HTC Desire C using proboards |
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Post by Officer Genious on Nov 5, 2013 12:50:40 GMT -5
I think these are the sort of "black box" logs in the character's head, intended as backups in case their memory was wiped (their brain is partially digitised - it makes accessing memories faster, and it allows direct digital download). OK have you considered making a note on that in your beginning? Just tossing an idea out there. Like the update you got. I wonder what his team makeup will be. |
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Nov 5, 2013 15:10:21 GMT -5
I will do so now :¬)
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Post by Officer Genious on Nov 5, 2013 16:42:06 GMT -5
Looks good! And it blends in the story well. Nice job.  |
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Nov 7, 2013 12:52:18 GMT -5
Posted. I was going to do it yesterday, but I watched the new Thor and didn't get time.
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Post by Officer Genious on Nov 7, 2013 13:01:50 GMT -5
Wait I thought that released tomorrow!! Aaaahhh gotta get tickets!
Going to read chap now, sideloading mah tikitz!
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Nov 7, 2013 13:04:42 GMT -5
It's not out everywhere - I know the US and Canada have it released tomorrow, but I'm in the UK, so for me it was last week.
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Post by Officer Genious on Nov 7, 2013 13:10:26 GMT -5
/glarejealously
Was it good?
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Nov 7, 2013 14:30:47 GMT -5
Definitely. There were times where there was a clear Star Wars influence, but the same could be said for a lot of the Avenger-based Marvel films. And one thing I will say (no spoilers) - stick right to the end of the credits. I found that out only after leaving the cinema, so I don't know why, but do.
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