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Post by grävling on Apr 13, 2019 18:28:57 GMT -5
 Either the name of the system is missing, or you have some extra whitespace in there. |
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Post by fallen on Apr 13, 2019 18:58:29 GMT -5
Thx fixed.
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Post by grävling on Apr 14, 2019 7:12:50 GMT -5
 s/aware/aware of/ but I think 'know' is better than 'are aware of' in this context. |
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Post by grävling on Apr 14, 2019 7:17:44 GMT -5
 I was really blunt. So I think the sense of this got reversed and what you meant to say was: I don't imagine the Arbiter suggested you put it that way. |
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Post by grävling on Apr 14, 2019 7:25:36 GMT -5
 This is really one sentence, which should not start with 'But' split into two word bubbles. You want 'The Arbiter has me in a corner, and she knows it .... but the first rule ' The first rule of trading I heard was 'it is important that both parties feel that they have benefitted by the exchange, otherwise it is not a trade, but banditry'. I think this is a bandit, not a trader talking to me.  Don't trust this guy, captain! |
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Post by grävling on Apr 14, 2019 7:30:46 GMT -5
 s/. If/, if/ |
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Post by grävling on Apr 14, 2019 7:38:00 GMT -5
 s/move/has moved/ s/responsibility/responsibilities/ <-- or is that a US/UK usage difference? The idiom is 'responsibilities' here. |
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Post by grävling on Apr 14, 2019 7:43:07 GMT -5
 s/Calagan's/Calagan/ |
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Post by grävling on Apr 14, 2019 8:07:32 GMT -5
 s/that/the/ |
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Post by fallen on Apr 14, 2019 12:40:33 GMT -5
Huge thanks for the attention to detail, all fixed!
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Post by grävling on Apr 14, 2019 12:51:13 GMT -5
Huge thanks for the attention to detail, all fixed! You shouldn't thank me for the attention to detail. It's an ever-present part of being me. I cannot turn it off, even when, as has happened I dearly want to, so that amounts to thanking me for being alive. Making the effort to make and post screenshots, however, that is work. You can thank me for that.  |
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Post by fallen on Apr 14, 2019 13:26:39 GMT -5
In that case, many thanks for the extra miles of effort you put in to improve the game!
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Post by grävling on Apr 14, 2019 14:25:39 GMT -5
You are most welcome. I love this game.
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Post by grävling on Apr 16, 2019 5:28:04 GMT -5
 s/face/faces/ |
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Post by grävling on Apr 16, 2019 5:33:14 GMT -5
 s/had/has/ |
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Don't trust this guy, captain!