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Post by grävling on Mar 30, 2019 6:18:00 GMT -5
With the popup comments, I am going to have to get better at quick screenshot capture. So I don't have one for this but --
Somebody said: 'Those Thulun starports certainly are distinct' (or something like that) s/distinct/distinctive/
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Post by fallen on Mar 30, 2019 12:54:34 GMT -5
Thx fixed.
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Post by grävling on Apr 2, 2019 8:28:52 GMT -5
s/know/known/
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Post by grävling on Apr 2, 2019 8:32:49 GMT -5
s/Spys/Spies/
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Post by grävling on Apr 2, 2019 8:35:11 GMT -5
s/require/requires/ s/increases/increase/
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Post by grävling on Apr 2, 2019 8:37:43 GMT -5
s/within/with/
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Post by grävling on Apr 2, 2019 8:44:03 GMT -5
'have reduced' is wrong. You either want 'reduced' or 'has reduced'. Except you might not want either, as you are about to use that verb again in the same sentence which makes it clunk. I like Our XXX has relaxed the tension, and reduced the enemy's hostility. as a replacement for the whole thing.
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Post by fallen on Apr 2, 2019 12:06:33 GMT -5
Thanks all fixed
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Post by grävling on Apr 3, 2019 9:32:28 GMT -5
s/or/nor/ except that 'happy tidings' are 'good news'. We bring neither happy tidings nor reason to be optimistic about the future, perhaps?
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Post by fallen on Apr 3, 2019 12:18:45 GMT -5
Thx fixed.
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Post by grävling on Apr 4, 2019 10:04:27 GMT -5
s/consider what we are coming asking about/considering what we are coming to ask about/ -- NOTE, several fixes in there s/also does not expect/is not expecting/ s/in stealth/stealthily/
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Post by fallen on Apr 4, 2019 12:14:40 GMT -5
Thx fixed.
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Post by grävling on Apr 5, 2019 10:40:00 GMT -5
I am running guns for the Hunna. I dropped off the advanced electronics
The screen read 'Captain Valencia' and I think it should be 'Captain, Valencia' -- he is greeting both of us, not calling Valencia a captain, correct?
sorry I missed the screen capture.
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Post by fallen on Apr 5, 2019 13:20:24 GMT -5
Unfortunately, I searched the entire game for 'Captain Valencia' and was unable to find it. It must have been slightly different.
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Post by grävling on Apr 6, 2019 4:34:05 GMT -5
I will be more careful about the screenshot next time I see it.
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