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Post by fallen on Apr 16, 2019 14:05:11 GMT -5
Thx fixed.
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Post by grävling on Apr 16, 2019 19:49:56 GMT -5
s/captain's/captains/
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Post by fallen on Apr 17, 2019 18:50:32 GMT -5
Thxf ixed.
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Post by grävling on Apr 19, 2019 6:31:09 GMT -5
s/such an/this/ or 'an audience such as this' but I much prefer the first version. fallen there isn't much toady in your nature, now, is there?
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Post by grävling on Apr 19, 2019 10:02:08 GMT -5
It's either 'breaks' .... and 'steals' or 'break' ... and 'steal' I like it better with the word 'and' and not the semi-colon as well.
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Post by fallen on Apr 19, 2019 22:38:09 GMT -5
s/such an/this/ or 'an audience such as this' but I much prefer the first version. fallen there isn't much toady in your nature, now, is there? Not planning to change this one. Fixed the Talent.
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Post by grävling on Apr 20, 2019 4:29:54 GMT -5
Okay, but around here you only stick 'such an' into this expression if you want to be sarcastic and/or contemptuous to the person you are speaking to. Maybe different in the USA? 'Cause that one drips sarcasm to me, and I thought you were trying to be sincere. If you were trying to be sarcastic, nevermind ....
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Post by grävling on Apr 20, 2019 7:06:50 GMT -5
s/left/had left/
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Post by fallen on Apr 20, 2019 12:06:02 GMT -5
thx fix
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Post by grävling on Apr 22, 2019 6:20:13 GMT -5
Unfortunately, I searched the entire game for 'Captain Valencia' and was unable to find it. It must have been slightly different. Yes, this was it, and I must have not seen the first ! the first time. So I read 'Captain Valencia!' -- my bad, sorry.
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