282 Typos

[MTKnife]

Vylana in the "Colony Ruins" dialog:

"Lost over 200 years ago, we were not going to find...."

I've had games where it felt like I was lost for over 200 years, but I think that's supposed to refer to ruins, not the explorers. Instead:

"Since they were lost over 200 years ago...."

In the next sentence, there really needs to be a comma after "center".

Later:

"...multiple were shot into orbit."

Should be something like:

"...multiple ones were shot into orbit."

And then:

"...other ships who passed..."

I don't normally want to correct a character's grammar, but this isn't a common mistake. I suspect what was meant here was something like "other colonists who passed...." Otherwise, that "who" should be a "that".

[MTKnife]

Another Vylana dialog:

"I know her, she's one of the pirates...."

I semi-colon or colon would work great here.

Later in the dialog:

"I see, so this is...."

Put a period for that comma.

Then:

"I am sorry, Jon runs...."

You could put in a period or whatnot, but better to put a "but" after the comma.

There's another comma splice in the bottom choice after that (the one about turning Vylana over), but I clicked before I could type it out.

BTW, this is another one where I don't understand why I can't Skip or Flash Charge.

[MTKnife]

Another dialog in that mission:

"It is damaged but with some careful prying, we should be able to get free its record banks."

You need a comma after "damaged", and the last part is awkwardly arranged (somewhat misplace modifier). Instead:

"...we should be able to get its record banks free."

Next:

"I see, so Yalto's pirates...."

A semi-colon or dash would be good there. Even a colon.

Finally, the captain makes reference to being a gifted gear that an "officer" could use. Nowadays, of course, any crew member could use it.

[MTKnife]

More Vylana:

"Our tour has not been in vain, we have...."

A colon would be nice there, but period, semi-colon, dash all work.

[MTKnife]

The dialog about new weapons introduced by the Coalition:

"She wanted to know if we'd needed a berth....

That should be either "we'd need" or "we needed".

Then:

"You've got my attention, what new upgrades?"

A colon would work there.

Then:

"They have been doing weapons' research..."

That apostrophe shouldn't be there.

[MTKnife]

More Vylana:

"Someone got to them before we did, I know it."

That would be good as a period or semi-colon.

[MTKnife]

Vylana's dialog (but an officer talking):

"The work of pirate without a doubt based on the weapons used."

You need a comma after "doubt".

Then (Vylana):

"I've been sparring with his pirates for years, I know."

That would work well as a semi-colon.

Next:

"Let's be honest, we all knew...."

Colon there.

[MTKnife]

Next dialog:

"They've been waiting for us for some time, they have...."

A colon or semi-colon or dash would work there.

"You heard the captain, spread out...."

A period or colon would work there.

Later:

"It is all secured against us but its all intact."

That should be "it's".

At the end of that dialog, Vylana says her officers have figured it all out. She has officers?? Are they all crowded into her one passenger cabin together?

[MTKnife]

A later dialog:

"We must descending quickly...."

That should be "descend".

[MTKnife]

Yalto speaking:

You've bested a few of my pirates, don't think..."

In this case, I would actually put a "but" before "don't". But otherwise use a period.

In the same sentence, he says "you are match". It should be "you are a match".

Later, Vylana:

"Maybe he deemed Emaphis 5 was too weak...."

Delete the "was"--deemed takes a direct object.

[MTKnife]

Next dialog:

"Your Prince is dead, lay down your weapons!"

An exclamation mark would work well there.

Then:

"The base is small, it had one purpose...."

A colon would work well there.

[MTKnife]

In the opening Draiv Solregard dialog:

"If we chose prison time...."

That should be "choose".

[MTKnife]

In the first Miz'Ey dialog:

"...about your missing miners, we'll do the rest."

A period would work well there.

I thought the Jyeeta was supposed to start after the Plague.

[MTKnife]

During a UCF riot, the doctor tab says:

"UCF riots denies medical services."

I assume the last part of that is hard-coded, which means the only way to fix it is to change the rumor name it "UCF riot".

[MTKnife]

Draiv Solregard pre-combat dialog:

"They're closing captain, we've got to move quickly."

A period works well there.