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Post by MTKnife on Oct 30, 2021 22:48:50 GMT -5
Opening dialog with Chekha:
"It was all whispers before, now it's a roar."
A semi-colon would work well there.
Near the end of that dialog, there's a "The factions" that should be "the factions".
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Post by MTKnife on Oct 30, 2021 22:50:06 GMT -5
Meeting with Jon Kaytyn again:
"It is a piece of history, it is our heritage."
A semi-colon would be good there.
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Post by MTKnife on Oct 30, 2021 22:55:47 GMT -5
That ugly Jyeeta mission for Chekha:
"No time for a history lesson, fight!!"
I'd put an exclamation point there.
After the combat, there's a "...as been created...."
That should be "has"
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Post by fallen on Nov 1, 2021 9:54:49 GMT -5
When dropping Vytautis off: "You are a free man, stand tall." That comma would probably be best as a colon. First, thank you for taking all the time to report typos. This is a time consuming, thankless job -- so thank you! Second, I'm going to ask that you no longer report "replace comma with semi-colon" cases, or at least don't expect that I will fix them. This was a style decision we made when we started writing the game and 4 years later with over 14,000 lines of dialog and far more text in the game -- it is not a game-wide stylistic decision we plan to revisit. It will take thousands of posts, oodles of hours and truly will never be a project finished. Highly appreciate the rest of the typo reports, we'll keep fixing them. |
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Post by MTKnife on Nov 1, 2021 15:33:39 GMT -5
Mightn't you have mentioned that a month ago?
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Post by fallen on Nov 2, 2021 10:36:02 GMT -5
Mightn't you have mentioned that a month ago? My apologies, I am sincerely sorry because I know you've put a lot of work into it. Honestly, it is something that has dawned on me slowly as I have fixed the posted typos. I have fixed most of the ones you suggested, but never found that ; fits into the game's style guide and always ended up rewriting or feeling like a fix wasn't needed. |
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Post by fallen on Nov 2, 2021 11:14:38 GMT -5
A toast for something, probably high Government rating: "Watch your words, every shadow has eyes...." That comma should be a colon. For my own notes, I fixed typos up to here. |
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Post by MTKnife on Nov 2, 2021 23:30:06 GMT -5
Kober on the Jyeeta:
"They're are some...."
Extra "are" in there.
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Post by fallen on Feb 9, 2022 13:36:59 GMT -5
All Fixed.
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