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Post by rabidbite on Mar 4, 2013 16:22:26 GMT -5
Cerberus Story thread: Sorry, I had to take this out. The 1st book is tentatively scheduled to come out in March 2015. Best bet is Amazon kindle.  Hello: Come late April-1st of May I will begin posting on a story I've been kicking about for the past six months. I am an amateur writer. I work close to 12 hours a day, so, I ask patience. I don't have an editor to help me with these posts, and as such the quality might be dubious even through I try to re-read each post a minimum of 3 times. Still its sooooo much fun to write Any comments, observations, discussions please post them here so as to preserve story continuity in the Cerberus thread. I will ask moderators to help with this As a preamble, I will post a scene I have already written, so you, the reader, can get a feel of the tonality of the story. I hope you enjoy. rabid |
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Post by grävling on Mar 4, 2013 18:22:39 GMT -5
WoW.
WoW Rabid. Chilling.
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Post by rabidbite on Mar 4, 2013 19:11:55 GMT -5
Thank you! Glad you liked it. I can say, without exaggeration, Cerberus .. is .. a monster. I want to make the reader feel it. I want horror to drip from the words. Not sure I will succeed, but I'll give it a good try. rabid |
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Post by fallen on Mar 4, 2013 20:30:56 GMT -5
Awesome start. I'm very curious to see the next segment. And yes, the scenario is chilling. It sounds like the act of revenge will truly reveal the monster. I hope we get to hear more about the past he has just re-learned.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 5, 2013 6:13:44 GMT -5
Sound great, can't wait for more to appear!  |
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Post by blackgauntlet on Mar 5, 2013 6:59:07 GMT -5
Hey! Who gave you permission to write my autobiography, man! :-p Good shit there. Even though there's zero description of the place, I could already imagine some kinda dark cell with multiple safety doors and service pods housing medical bots and security drones. Nifty!
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Mar 5, 2013 11:36:04 GMT -5
"Gripping" is the word I'd use to describe that. It's more gripping than a lot of things I've read, actually. Nice work - I look forward to its continuation. And it also kind of reminded me of the Comedian from Watchmen (though that may be because Watchmen ranks as one of my all-time favourite pieces of writing).
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Post by kris on Mar 6, 2013 3:21:32 GMT -5
Awesome! I like the story very much.  |
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Post by rabidbite on Mar 6, 2013 12:40:05 GMT -5
I couldn't resist. I posted a little more of the pre-story arc. '
*sigh* Sometimes its like an addiction.
rabid
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Post by fallen on Mar 6, 2013 14:03:24 GMT -5
Hahaha, feed the addiction! Another awesome segment to read!
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Post by LordofSyn on Mar 6, 2013 14:40:08 GMT -5
Excellent in its tone and undertones. I have already exalted you, and now I give you a virtual High Five. Keep up the addiction...
it helps the rest of us that are addicted too.
;-)
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Post by grävling on Mar 6, 2013 16:24:49 GMT -5
Oh thank you. I needed that. |
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Post by rabidbite on Mar 7, 2013 22:33:14 GMT -5
The 3rd scene just plopped into my head and wouldn't leave me alone  rabid |
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Post by blackgauntlet on Mar 11, 2013 6:59:30 GMT -5
What the... "and Jim died"? How? Why? Who? When? Where?
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Post by grävling on Mar 11, 2013 9:13:22 GMT -5
It was as bad as someone sliding chalk on a board
I now get to meet people who have made it all the way to university without ever experiencing 'chalk on chalkboard'. It's all 'markers on whiteboard' for them.
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