Jamozk Ekhiss
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Jul 6, 2013 7:57:00 GMT -5
This is awesome - and what's funny for me is that I've recently been making big money by taking corpland contracts (where everyone hates me), then going to Blue Ox (where they don't care) and just taking taxis straight out, with no pursuing drones or death-bringing Knights to worry about (though I suppose that'll change when I get a Data Hound who pays for their info).
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Post by rabidbite on Jul 7, 2013 19:51:25 GMT -5
Well, I did it again. I switched names mid story without even realizing it. I'm hunting down everywhere that I wrote "Victoria" instead of "Veronica" If you find a spot, be a dear and point it out.
rabid
EDIT:
FOUND 7 instances so far. There should be 5 more.
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Post by grävling on Jul 7, 2013 19:54:08 GMT -5
I really like what you are doing with Akira. Thank you.
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Post by rabidbite on Jul 9, 2013 14:48:22 GMT -5
Any time Grav.
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About the story:
Found 1 time continuity error. When driving around Blue Ox is "a few minutes" not a "few hours."
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Post by rabidbite on Jul 9, 2013 22:35:57 GMT -5
Hmm. I'm going to change Akira's dialogue to sound more ... refined. Even dandy-ish. Someone that was as well educated as him does not need to sound like he speaks like everyone else.
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rsgong
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Post by rsgong on Jul 9, 2013 23:33:08 GMT -5
Thanks for the update. I had just read the rest this morning. Talk about timing.  Greatly enjoying your story. +1 |
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Post by rabidbite on Jul 9, 2013 23:35:02 GMT -5
Thanks for the update. I had just read the rest this morning. Talk about timing. Greatly enjoying your story. +1 Lol Thanks |
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Post by rabidbite on Jul 10, 2013 13:22:10 GMT -5
Sick. Got next piece of story written but too sick to proofread it carefully. Will try later.
rabid
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rsgong
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Post by rsgong on Jul 10, 2013 13:47:43 GMT -5
No worries, we aren't going anywhere. Take care of yourself. |
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Post by rabidbite on Jul 14, 2013 14:51:50 GMT -5
Ok, taking a brake from Cerberus to do another spell check and continuity verification.
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Post by rabidbite on Jul 19, 2013 10:41:31 GMT -5
So, I sat down to read information on Game of Thrones. Imagine my surprise when I find out the other name for "White Walkers" is ... "drum roll" ... the Others.
Son of a gun. So I will have to think of a different name for my monstrosities.
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Post by rabidbite on Jul 28, 2013 16:18:15 GMT -5
As I was writing the future chapters of Cerberus, I noticed my word count is at 43,000+ words.
According to Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America, that means that Cerberus is now book length (I thought it was supposed to be 60k+ words but it seems to vary)
This is, in essence, my second book length project. I try not to count those projects I have on hold (I've mentioned a few). It kind of kicked me in the chins, if you know what I mean.
rabid
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ncaoa
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Post by ncaoa on Jul 28, 2013 17:18:47 GMT -5
As I was writing the future chapters of Cerberus, I noticed my word count is at 43,000+ words. According to Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America, that means that Cerberus is now book length (I thought it was supposed to be 60k+ words but it seems to vary) This is, in essence, my second book length project. I try not to count those projects I have on hold (I've mentioned a few). It kind of kicked me in the chins, if you know what I mean. rabid Great! |
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Jamozk Ekhiss
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Jul 31, 2013 8:14:19 GMT -5
This is epic. Just saying.
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Post by paxdad on Jul 31, 2013 17:12:17 GMT -5
Nice job Rabid! Congratulations.  Sent from my SGH-M919 using proboards |
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Greatly enjoying your story. +1
