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Post by rabidbite on Aug 22, 2014 9:04:54 GMT -5
Ooooo, finally came up with a good villain name for one of the bosses in my other stories. Even added it to my signature.
Akraos the End Lord. End Lord sounds much better than Lord of End.
I ... freaking ... LOVE IT. It sounds vile, dangerous, excessively melodramatic and majestic. It makes me think of evil kings.
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Post by mataeus on Aug 22, 2014 9:49:00 GMT -5
Ooooo, finally came up with a good villain name for one of the bosses in my other stories. Even added it to my signature. Akraos the End Lord. End Lord sounds much better than Lord of End. I ... freaking ... LOVE IT. It sounds vile, dangerous, excessively melodramatic and majestic. It makes me think of evil kings. rabid Excellent. I like punchy, dramatic names. Like in Man of Steel, it's not a terraformer... It's a World Engine. Sounds... Catastrophic. Ultimate. Final. |
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Post by Jacob on Aug 23, 2014 5:13:07 GMT -5
I'm still hating you for deleting Cerberus... But good luck with the new things!  Sent from my XT1032 using Tapatalk |
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Post by Jamozk Ekhiss on Aug 28, 2014 7:56:36 GMT -5
Ooooo, finally came up with a good villain name for one of the bosses in my other stories. Even added it to my signature. Akraos the End Lord. End Lord sounds much better than Lord of End. I ... freaking ... LOVE IT. It sounds vile, dangerous, excessively melodramatic and majestic. It makes me think of evil kings. rabid It sounds like the kind of name a Dark Souls boss would have. Perfect for a grand villain. |
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Post by rabidbite on Oct 31, 2014 11:36:45 GMT -5
I spent 3 hours explaining the story to a digital artist on monday.
I hope I didn't scare him off! LOL!
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Post by grävling on Oct 31, 2014 19:16:39 GMT -5
Fingers crossed, holding both thumbs.
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Post by rabidbite on Nov 2, 2014 23:02:42 GMT -5
You know, I want to change Cerberus' mask from a black and red hockey mask to a plague doctor mask. Unfortunately the long crow beak would make it a truly harsh combat mask.
Though, mark my words, I will write someone using it sooner or later.
Plague Doctors can be really darn scary.
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Post by Jacob on Nov 3, 2014 2:51:23 GMT -5
Indeed. They freak me out like hell. These darn thick glasses and these masks... It... It just... *shudder*
But a Hockey mask is a good deal more practical... BTW, didn't you want to rewrite Cerberus so you could publish it? Or did I mess something up there?
Sent from my rooted Falcon -- I want "Cerberus: By Hatred Born" back!! ASAP.
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Post by rabidbite on Nov 5, 2014 16:23:30 GMT -5
Yes? As of October 24, I'm working full bore to finish all the edits. I've found a ton of minor mistakes, one huge continuity error, and I'm having problems with finding communicative artists. Most nod nod, smile, and talk very positively .... then never pick up the phone again.
*sigh*
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Post by Jacob on Nov 6, 2014 20:37:26 GMT -5
I feel somewhat sorry for you, but at the same time I feel excitement and hatred....
I'm still not very glad about you taking it down... But I'm getting happier and happier now that I know it'll cone back in one form or another...
Speaking of forms: Paperback, eBook or both?
I hope the edited version doesn't differ _too_ much from the wonderful piece of written art I cane to know and love...
Edit: For Hells Sake, keep it as a hockey mask!! It not only would look a good deal better, it'd also be a reference to the Rabid Rabbit Char.
Cerberus' Hockeymask-->Jason.
Jasons Chainsaw-->RR. Perhaps you can even slip some nice RR eastereggs into the book?
Sent from my rooted Falcon -- I want "Cerberus: By Hatred Born" back!! ASAP.
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Post by rabidbite on Nov 7, 2014 14:15:45 GMT -5
Haha, the mask is staying. I love the Plague Doctor mask ... but -that- I will use on another story. I mean, WOW, plague doctor masks are freaking AWESOME. They are Halloween with steroids. Makes demons look downright gaudy.
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Post by rabidbite on Nov 9, 2014 17:45:44 GMT -5
Spent a good 5 hours editing today. Since I started (On October 25th) to edit from the very first word of the very first chapter, I'm pretty happy with the progress. About to finish Part II of the book (On the final chapter). Only Part III remains to be edited.
Loads of work, but it is coming along.
Self publishing is an education. I'll need around $900-$1,500 to self publish with cover art, professional editing and proofreading, multiple formats.
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Post by ntsheep on Nov 9, 2014 18:24:36 GMT -5
Just in time for Christmas, Rabid Rabbit, the gift that keeps on killing  |
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Post by rabidbite on Nov 14, 2014 7:20:19 GMT -5
Editing around chapter 45: When Cerberus gets his arse handed to him at the Orca Arcology. Just to let you know I'm really doing the work. rabid |
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Post by Jacob on Nov 15, 2014 18:13:19 GMT -5
Extremely good to know...
Mraaaaaahaaaawawawawawah!
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