New Typos

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Saytek Medical
They say their research focuses on 'the health issues of the 22nd century'. Should be 23rd, no?

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Sparrow Street Liquor
s/Better/better/

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Claire Street Thrift Store
s/random computer/random computer,/
s/One for Cyber Knight/One for a Cyber Knight/
s/already Cyber/already, Cyber/
s/knock off/the knock-off/

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The Bungalow
s/Fenians/Fennians/ (sigh, I still would prefer a global replacement the other direction)

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Black Water Saloon
s/Comon'in/Comon in/
s/Searge McCleary/Sarge McCleary/
s/Old Searge/Old Sarge/

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Captain Malloy
s/I friend told/A friend told/
s/where we try to keep this from rotting out its underbelly./where we try to keep spies from rotting out its underbelly/ (or maybe you meant something else, but _this_ doesn't make sense)
And all the 'Sargeant' references need to have their spelling changed to this.

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Investigator Shahin

s/... Competition/... competition/
s/brain washed/brain-washed/
s/...Dubious/... dubious/
s/... Working/... working/

It looks to me as if you don't know the rule about this. If you want to indicate a long pause, as if for thought, say for selecting how to phrase something, then you want the next word in lower case. If you capitalise the word, then the way that reads is that the first sentence was left uncompleted, and a new sentence began, with the characteristic raising of the voice that we do when we start new sentences (in English).

so ... 'BraveStar always has an interest in its .... competition.'

but

'If we weren't so damned competitive, so constantly at each others .... Competition isn't always positive, you know!'

does this make sense?

There are exceptions. If the word that follows the pause is one that is always capitalised, then, yes, it's always capitalised.

'I think I can make it on ..... Tuesday.'

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Brave Star Offices

s/backroom/back room/

Actually, either is fine, but you need to be consistent. The dialogs here use the word
both with and without the space. You need to decide which way you want to spell it and
then attack the whole corpus changing them all to be whatever is decided. I think I am
seeing far more 'back room' with the space, if it matters. And I saw one 'back-room' somewhere, I forget where now, which I have already posted as needing to be 'back room'.

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Church of St. Patrick (in Dorchester)
s/welcome into his house/welcome in His house/ (note 2 fixes)
s/way of the lord/way of the Lord/
s/good lord/good Lord/

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In the manual, in the section on spending experience

s/Athletics and Brawilng/Athletics and Brawling/

s/if your physical Strength is high, find it/if your physical Strength is high, you will find it/
s/If you talent/If your skill/ (note, 2 changes -- beacause I don't think that skills and talents are the same thing).
s/more XP is required/more XP will be required to raise it./

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Introduction
s/north east coast/north-east coast/

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Agent DX-Suit

Change to:

Even though constructed of nanoceramic materials, this type of body armor remains light and semi-flexible. This allows soldiers to be more mobile, and doesn't hinder them when running or aiming their weapons.

(Neat idea for armour, by the way. I am going to try it now. For once, Mars Corp does not get my business. )

The Hades Hardsuit uses the same description, so it should be changed to the above as well. Though it actually does hinder you when dodging. Same for the AzTek Jaguar Armou, whose text should change to the above as well.

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Knight Horizon Clinic
s/Knight Horizon's Medical/Knight Horizon Medical/

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Aztek Report #2786-1A (Konta Family)
s/an banker/a banker/
s/external to their direction organization/external to their direct organization/

question: Does Shinto-gumi live in Japan? Or at least outside of NBZ?

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Benni The Taxi --> Benni the Taxi Driver ??

s/What up/What's up/
s/NBZ/the NBZ/
s/Its full/It's full/
s/hood/'hood/