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Post by grävling on Dec 19, 2011 1:22:42 GMT -5
New Introduction
s/humanitys/humanity's/
s/reignited/re-ignited/
s/they are expendable/are expendable/
s/None more/None moreso/
s/extensive nanotech/extensive nanotechnological/
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Post by grävling on Dec 19, 2011 1:48:04 GMT -5
Drone Factory
s/rouge/rogue/
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Post by grävling on Dec 19, 2011 2:33:51 GMT -5
Knight Horizon Logistics
s/Knight Horizon's/Knight Horizon/
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Post by grävling on Dec 19, 2011 2:37:33 GMT -5
Old St. Paddy's
has no text.
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Post by grävling on Dec 19, 2011 2:55:35 GMT -5
Doctor Dave
s/ready after/ready for after/
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Post by grävling on Dec 19, 2011 9:48:45 GMT -5
Rare Flask Inn
s/aint/ain't/
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Post by grävling on Dec 19, 2011 10:25:52 GMT -5
Narrows Street Clinic
s/Patient's/Patients'/
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Post by grävling on Dec 19, 2011 12:32:46 GMT -5
E- Street Pharmacy
s/May some willing/Maybe some that are willing/
s/you meet my brother/have you met my brother/
s/if you need/is you need/
s/Elite-SRV/Elite-SERV/ -- I think; I seem not to have a game with this character now.
Also this dialog makes McFly sound like he avoids all dangerous situations, when he only avoids extremely dangerous ones -- i.e. it fits Benni's character more than McFly's
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Post by fallen on Dec 19, 2011 14:34:31 GMT -5
Whew! I have completed the first two pages of corrections. Thanks again Gravling. I will come back to the next few pages this week and try to keep up better!
These will be available in the release after 0.6.13.
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Post by grävling on Dec 19, 2011 17:34:39 GMT -5
Independent Properties
s/at the Independent Properties/at Independent Properties/
s/all at an affordable and fair low price!/all at affordable and fair low prices!/
or /each at an affordable and fair low price!/
I think the 'full-blown video display' needs to be something else. It is the 23rd century after all, so they must have some sort of immersive alternative reality engines out there, or however you decide to call them.
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Post by grävling on Dec 19, 2011 20:09:14 GMT -5
Department of Water
s/Yakuza Knight/Yakuza, Knight/
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Post by grävling on Dec 19, 2011 22:17:58 GMT -5
Congress Street Taxi Company
s/are the taxi's/are the taxis/
s/There aren't taxis/There aren't any taxis/
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Post by grävling on Dec 19, 2011 22:29:45 GMT -5
SIx Clip
s/Well you're gonna need a good team together/gonna need to put together a good team/
s/Exactly who/Exactly whom/
s/there own style/their own style/
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Post by grävling on Dec 20, 2011 17:01:38 GMT -5
Summer Street Pharmacy
s/give in/give in, /
s/burnt out/being burnt out/
s/but just the most stubborn/just the most stubborn./ (note 2 fixes)
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Post by grävling on Dec 20, 2011 17:12:39 GMT -5
B-Street Extended Stays
s/ Course/'Course/
s/ ... If/ ... if/
s/Cyber Knights/Cyber Knight's/
s/its true/it's true/
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