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Post by grävling on Dec 23, 2011 12:11:50 GMT -5
Light CarboMag
s/Constructive of/Constructed with/
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Post by grävling on Dec 23, 2011 16:13:03 GMT -5
Los Valentinos Den
s/Valentines/Valentinos/ (2 x)
s/watch your steps/watch your step/
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Post by grävling on Dec 25, 2011 19:09:59 GMT -5
Jennings
s/cause/'cause/
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Post by grävling on Dec 25, 2011 20:30:19 GMT -5
Church of Faith, Fury and Redemption s/vestibule/the vestibule/ And it sounds more like 'Retribution' than 'Redemption' to me  or Faith, Fury, and Firearms? |
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Post by grävling on Dec 26, 2011 5:33:35 GMT -5
And the 'Refuse to Loose' building really needs to be 'Refuse to Lose' -- unless they are in the business of dumping garbage (refuse) into the Bay.
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Post by grävling on Dec 26, 2011 6:09:08 GMT -5
Artifacts and Antiquities Dealer
s/likely/is likely/
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Post by grävling on Jan 1, 2012 20:20:51 GMT -5
Some of the Fennian thugs that can jump you are called 'Fenian'.
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Post by grävling on Jan 1, 2012 22:38:16 GMT -5
Moon Room Club
s/Wellcome/Welcome/
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Post by grävling on Jan 2, 2012 19:32:29 GMT -5
Ricco's Boat SERV
s/just inside the Harbour/just inside the Harbor/
s/I probably isn't gonna/I'm probably not gonna/
s/Hope on my/Hop on my/
s/right on the Harbor/right to the Harbor/
s/cause/'cause/
s/captain papers/captain's papers/
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Post by grävling on Jan 3, 2012 2:19:06 GMT -5
Patty Coogan
s/weaponary/weaponry/
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Post by grävling on Jan 3, 2012 15:01:21 GMT -5
Frontline Medical Warehouse backdoor
s/to business to the public/for business with the public/
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Post by grävling on Jan 4, 2012 14:22:43 GMT -5
Dr. Cure All
s/Frontline Mwdi- Secure/Frontline Medi-Secure/
s/in the AzTek towers are of/in the AzTek Towers area/ (note 2 fixes) and shouldn't that be AzTek Global, not AzTek Towers?
Also, all of the kits are branded 'Yakashima' but they should be branded 'AzTek' or 'Frontline' to fit the story.
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Post by fallen on Jan 5, 2012 10:38:42 GMT -5
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or Faith, Fury, and Firearms?
