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Post by fallen on Apr 1, 2017 23:32:44 GMT -5
Thx fixed!
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Post by Nathan on Apr 3, 2017 19:21:43 GMT -5
Ep4 / Braeys War Camp
Fyona
Would he be so stupid to send to go to war against the Koda?
(maybe)
- Would he be stupid enough to go to war against the Koda?
Ep4 / Walled Braeyshaulm
Elais Braeys
Your prowess are unrivaled. I wonder to myself, how did you survive fighting the Seer Lords?
- Your prowess is unrivaled. I wonder to myself, how did you survive fighting the Seer Lords?
Guard
Yes, Paladin. Let me show you into the study, she will attend your shortly.
- Yes, Paladin. Let me show you into the study, she will attend you shortly.
Vincent
With the defeat the City of the Dead, these are indeed dark times.
- With the defeat at the City of the Dead, these are indeed dark times.
Ep4 / Storm Bastian
Vincent
We know how difficult it is, Tyrae, but we need your help. We cannot find Ravenna without the Ellista and her Third-Eye.
- We know how difficult it is, Tyrae, but we need your help. We cannot find Ravenna without the Ellista and her Third-Eye.
OR
- We know how difficult it is, Tyrae, but we need your help. We cannot find Ravenna without the power of Ellista and her Third-Eye.
Ep4 / Brunehorn
Fyona
We have come to speak with you about conflict at the City of Ember.
- We have come to speak with you about the conflict at the City of Ember.
Ep4 / OWH
Tevensa
This is the haven of Ellista, our Father's the Second Daughter.
- This is the haven of Ellista, our Father's the Second Daughter.
OR
- This is the haven of Ellista, our Father's the second daughter.
Fyona
Yes, we will fight their spirits along - they left their bodies behind long ago.
- Yes, we will fight their spirits along - they left their bodies behind long ago.
OR (depending on the previous statement, which I don't remember)
- Yes, we will fight their spirits alone - they left their bodies behind long ago.
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Post by wascalwywabbit on Apr 7, 2017 13:09:27 GMT -5
Great Maker's Workshop - Selen
(going from memory)
There appears to be a double/extra space in one dialogue text.
”...We are her Chosen." -double space between are+her.
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Post by fallen on Apr 8, 2017 11:21:17 GMT -5
Nathan - all fixed! wascalwywabbit - sorry, couldn't find the typo that you mentioned from memory. With 15,000+ lines to look through, without exact quoting that woudl take me hours and I might never find it.
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Post by wascalwywabbit on Apr 8, 2017 18:38:52 GMT -5
Nathan - all fixed! wascalwywabbit - sorry, couldn't find the typo that you mentioned from memory. With 15,000+ lines to look through, without exact quoting that woudl take me hours and I might never find it. Ok, I found the exact quote... "...We are your Chosen ..." Double space appears between are+your. Sneak was talking to Ryethin not about her...  |
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Post by fallen on Apr 8, 2017 18:44:36 GMT -5
Nathan - all fixed! wascalwywabbit - sorry, couldn't find the typo that you mentioned from memory. With 15,000+ lines to look through, without exact quoting that woudl take me hours and I might never find it. Ok, I found the exact quote... "...We are your Chosen ..." Double space appears between are+your. Sneak was talking to Ryethin not about her... You're the best! That was what I needed  Fixed for next. |
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Post by wascalwywabbit on Apr 11, 2017 3:15:17 GMT -5
Barely worth mentioning, but... defile is used for valley/gorge in the Kiresh Highlands... Historically it meant places where soldiers or the like had to cross single file and makes more sense to me in that older use for the setting of the game, but the Highlands are pretty open feeling, not single file much at all...
Also you put south east in the text before entering Freeport. Using south-east, a hyphenated compound would be better afaik.
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Post by Nathan on Apr 11, 2017 7:30:01 GMT -5
wascalwywabbit - my memory could be off, but I thought the statement(s) where "defile" was used (by Selen upon entering the Kiresh Highlands map, I think) referred to the journey between CliffSide Road and Kiresh Highlands, so could still be legit..?
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Post by fallen on Apr 11, 2017 9:44:55 GMT -5
Yeah, I believe they talk about coming out of a defile into the Highlands?
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Post by wascalwywabbit on Apr 11, 2017 14:49:36 GMT -5
You guys are right - I really should confirm with a second time through before posting...
Exact Quote:
"They've been watching us from a distance as we have marched up this defile." -sneak
I interpreted "as we have" to mean they were continuing in the defile, as opposed to as we -had-, also They've Been vs They were.
Especially since it continues with the mystic saying:
"This is the valley where their shrines are - I can feel it."
I thought defile and valley were being used interchangeably as is done sometimes these days.
Anyway, minor stuff, but it confused this dumb bunny with the meanings since it could go either way...
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Post by fallen on Apr 11, 2017 15:08:43 GMT -5
Thanks for checking it yourself. Love you guys.
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Post by wascalwywabbit on Apr 13, 2017 1:23:00 GMT -5
Wintry Halls - Mystic
"It looks like once a place for the Order of the Eye, but it has long fallen into ruin."
Recommended:
"It looks like it was once a place for the Order of the Eye, but it has long since fallen into ruin." -more readable.
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Post by fallen on Apr 13, 2017 14:33:07 GMT -5
Thx!
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Post by Nathan on Apr 17, 2017 7:00:18 GMT -5
Ep1 / Oskahold Mariah Strom For the sake of a region . . . I know a way that you could go. - For the sake of the region . . . I know a way that you could go. Karden And he had green eyes - I remember those. They were piercing. I wish I could thank you. - And he had green eyes - I remember those. They were piercing. I wish I could thank him. Fyona Thank you, Karden. If we ever meet the man, we will thank you for you. - Thank you, Karden. If we ever meet the man, we will thank him for you.
I can only think of one character in the game that is continually referred to by his green eyes... It would be an interesting twist if he was the one who helped Karden back to Oskahold... |
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Post by fallen on Apr 17, 2017 11:07:21 GMT -5
Thx fixed. Nathan - interesting theory You're right about there only being one character talked about that way. Maybe there is more to him than there seems. |
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