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Post by fallen on Jul 30, 2017 21:46:10 GMT -5
Thanks, all fixed!
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Post by fallen on Jul 30, 2017 21:46:48 GMT -5
Ep4 / Tower Undercroft Fyona Straight to the heart of their evil kingdom. She said to kill a God, you must go into its home. - Straight to the heart of their evil kingdom. She said to kill a God, you must go into their home. Except this one ... "to kill a God" indicates singular, so I believe "its" is actually right. Their indicates plural? |
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Post by Nathan on Aug 1, 2017 1:25:47 GMT -5
Ep4 / Tower Undercroft Fyona Straight to the heart of their evil kingdom. She said to kill a God, you must go into its home. - Straight to the heart of their evil kingdom. She said to kill a God, you must go into their home. Except this one ... "to kill a God" indicates singular, so I believe "its" is actually right. Their indicates plural? fallen - To explaining my thinking - not trying to argue or convince:
The reason I put that one in was to be consistent with Ravenna's earlier dialog (which I will confirm in the near future), but I believe she used "their", and I thought "its" sounded a little off in that sentence, but that could just be me.
FYI:
"Singular they is the use in English of the pronoun they or its inflected or derivative forms, them, their, theirs, and themselves (or themself), as an epicene (gender-neutral) singular pronoun. It typically occurs with an antecedent of indeterminate gender, as in sentences such as:
"Somebody left their umbrella in the office. Would they please collect it?"
"The patient should be told at the outset how much they will be required to pay."
"But a journalist should not be forced to reveal their sources."
The singular they had emerged by the 14th century and is common in everyday spoken English, but its use has been the target of criticism since the late 19th century. Its use in formal English has increased with the trend toward gender-inclusive language."
On another note - can't wait to get the update (4.4.15), I still have one group in Freeport, and one on their way to meet Ravenna, plus 2 entering the Battlements. You guys are amazing for staying on top of all this and the more important issues that have come in!! ... not to mention the other games I wish I could think of a better way to say "Keep up the great work!!"
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Post by Nathan on Aug 16, 2017 22:47:42 GMT -5
Ep4 / Tower Battlements
Weigarn
Ravenna! We have wondered these seventy years where you were might be.
- Ravenna! We have wondered these seventy years where you were might be.
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- Ravenna! We have wondered these seventy years where you were might be.
Ravenna
Ha, big brother, did you miss me?
Do not sugar your tongue, like your younger brother Rabiel might.
Weigarn
Missed you? No. Wondered where you were hiding? Yes.
- Miss you? No. Wonder where you were hiding? Yes.
Ep4 / Ruins of Ember
Vraes
Just like you stepped into battle at our side when we first saved the Seer Lords.
- Just like you stepped into battle at our side when we first fought the Seer Lords.
Vraes
If not for your courage, Nikolai we would have fallen and not returned
- If not for your courage, Nikolai, we would have fallen and not returned
Ep4 / Ruins of Ember (dialog issue)
Nikolai
I know that you have helped Hagathrun pass on from this world.
Tamilin
I am sure his father, Baron Tazzar, will be overjoyed at his successful return
Tamilin
I am sure both his father, Baron Tazzar, and Hagathrun will be overjoyed at his successful return
> Tamilin should only make one of those statements, not both (in this particular playthrough I did kill Hagathrun)
Ep4 / Ruins of Ember (message)
Kjartan
We have gained 1,000 Experience for helping Nikolai pass on.
> Nikolai is not dead... I am assuming this message is if he died and you meet a reanimated Nikolai - though I'm hoping you get the xp either way
Ep4 / Necromantic Sanctuary
Tamilin
Where we find them where we can, and put them down.
- Where we find them we should put them down.
(I'm really guessing on this one... based on what I think the intended statement is)
Ep4 / Deepwater Waste
Tamilin
Vraes, I'm not sure we should wake . . . whatever it is locked up down there.
- Vraes, I'm not sure we should wake . . . whatever it is locked up down there.
Ep4 / Storm Bastion
Gansai
You have done what none other could have hoped to achieve, Chosen.
- You have done what no other could have hoped to achieve, Chosen.
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Post by fallen on Aug 17, 2017 9:10:24 GMT -5
Thanks, all fixed! Great work  +1 |
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Post by Nathan on Aug 22, 2017 2:05:30 GMT -5
Ep4 / Ruins of Ember
Vincent
We have free the City of Ember from its curse. They will be able to rest, at last.
- We have freed the City of Ember from its curse. They will be able to rest, at last.
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Post by fallen on Aug 22, 2017 9:42:31 GMT -5
Thx fixed!
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