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Post by Nathan on Jun 19, 2017 19:33:34 GMT -5
Ep4 / Koda War Camp (immediately after escaping CoD)
Kjartan
They've found a the ruins of an old outpost or fort and they've slunk in to rest.
- They've found a the ruins of an old outpost or fort and they've slunk in to rest.
Soldier
Before the fighting started, I heard they killed Vlotgar Braeys in the north.
[ - I spared Vlotgar... should this rumour still exist? - ]
Kjartan
We can give her guidance an advice . . . But if the Baron's orders come, she will follow.
- We can give her guidance and advice . . . But if the Baron's orders come, she will follow.
Ep4 / Walled Braeyshaulm
Soldier
Take what you have to say up with his Morgan at the Ember Lake camp.
- Take what you have to say up with his son Morgan at the Ember Lake camp.
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- Take what you have to say up with his Morgan at the Ember Lake camp.
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Post by fallen on Jun 21, 2017 12:37:29 GMT -5
Nathan - thanks for the typo fixes! Also, I fixed the incorrect rumor that you killed Vlotar. Thanks for providing the exact dialog, that made it really easy to fix 
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Post by crimsonshadow on Jun 21, 2017 15:40:29 GMT -5
Fallen,
You should really consider bringing Nathan on as content editor-in-chief!
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Post by Nathan on Jul 6, 2017 3:46:35 GMT -5
Ep4 / Koda camp
Fyona
And you will give our words with all the weight that they deserve.
- And you will give our words with all the weight that they deserve.
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- And you will give our words with all the weight that they deserve.
Ep4 / Ancient Monistary
Remember when we woke him, he has been in the Temple of Thirteen for years without food or water.
- Remember when we woke him, he had been in the Temple of Thirteen for years without food or water.
Ep4 / Brunehorn (sorry - I didn't capture the exact text for this one, but it occurs when you first return to Brunehorn via Overland Pass after CoD)
Upon entering Brunehorn for the first time in Ep4, via Overland Pass, after escaping CoD, the guard at the entrance says that Knight Marko DeVaan is waiting for you at the main lodge. In this particular playthrough this was not true as Knight Marko DeVaan was at the Koda War Camp. It was the new Baron, Valent Koda, who spoke to me at the lodge.
I believe this scenario only happens if you keep the Heartbeat of Summer and side with Koda for CoD.
Alternately, if you return the Heartbeat of Summer and side with Koda for CoD the guard at the gate says the newly appointed Knight Heinrick (something like that) is waiting at the lodge, but again it is the new Baron who speaks to you.
Baron Valent Koda
But you will exact no promises from me. If it is war that the Braeys want, then they will get.
- But you will exact no promises from me. If it is war that the Braeys want, then they will get it.
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- But you will exact no promises from me. If it is war that the Braeys want, then war is what they will get.
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Post by Nathan on Jul 14, 2017 19:13:15 GMT -5
Ep4 / when leaving OWH
Vincent
We can spare no time to hunt her down to revenge our friend.
- We can spare no time to hunt her down to avenge our friend.
Selen
To reach Freeport, we must to travel to Brunhorn and then go east to Crag Peak. There is a ford there across the River Torrent.
- To reach Freeport, we must first travel to Brunhorn, and then go east to Crag Peak. There is a ford there across the River Torrent.
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- To reach Freeport, we must to travel to Brunhorn, and then go east to Crag Peak. There is a ford there across the River Torrent.
Ep4 / Cliffside Road
Bloodlace
She is a talent healer and a wise woman. But she is not a Freeport sorceress as I am.
- She is a talented healer and a wise woman, but she is not a Freeport sorceress as I am.
Ep4 / Cliffside Road dialog inconsistency
Background:
When crossing the River Torrent to Cliffside Road, Selen/Tamlin says that when she left Freeport, the old Baroness (I don't remember her name) was ruling and her daughter was next in line...
After crossing the guard tells the group that the old Baroness passed away 4 years ago.
Issue:
At the fort just after the initial dialog with Bloodlace, Selen/Tamlin says, "She has ruled here in Freeport for six years" - referring to the Crone.
Based on the earlier dialogs, this is not knowledge that she has.
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Post by Nathan on Jul 16, 2017 14:55:48 GMT -5
Ep4 / Freeport
Laranda
Hopefully, he has minded to his manners.
- Hopefully, he has minded to his manners.
Fyona
We do. We plan to speak with her about a path down the sea floor.
- We do. We plan to speak with her about a path down to the sea floor.
Laranda
In fact, my mother led the expedition that has started this new city of Freeport.
- In fact, my mother led the expedition that has started this new city of Freeport.
Ep4 / Freeport wrong character displayed for dialog
Laranda, we'd like to ask you about the Thirteen. >> We need to learn everything we can about Ravenna.
During this dialog, there are 2 things said by Laranda that should be said by one or 2 members of the party:
"Yes, but before that." followed by "We need to know everything you can tell us."
These read like responses to Laranda's initial answer, not a continuation of her speech.
Ep4 / Empty dialog box
Laranda, we'd like to ask you about the Thirteen. >> Many of the Thirteen possessed a powerful item, a focus of their power...
During this dialog an empty dialog box is displayed:
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Cortias was given Ghenvellum, the curved blade of legend, by his older brother Vurnak.
EMPTY DIALOG BOX
Ryethin, the fleet-footed guide earned herself Death on her shoulder.
...
Ep4 / Laranda asks herself a question
Laranda
What can you find in the histories about the Weaver?
It should be one of the party asking the question
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Post by Nathan on Jul 19, 2017 17:02:56 GMT -5
Ep4 / Ocean Gate typos
Ravenna
Indeed they did, and when demon taught them great magic, they abandoned Ellista to worship at Irulik's table.
- Indeed they did, and when the demon taught them great magic, they abandoned Ellista to worship at Irulik's table.
Tamlin
Ravenna, you know their power! Do not make the mistake of marching such a trap!
- Ravenna, you know their power! Do not make the mistake of marching into such a trap!
Ravenna
Once Caal was dead on my blade, the Old Gods have started creeping back into our world.
- Once Caal was dead on my blade, the Old Gods have started creeping back into our world.
In the dialog that occurs upon your return from the Salt Flats, there is a line that is said twice:
Ambra
It will be on your faith that this world is restored, you must know that.
Kyera
I know that I must accept your final gift, Myshana.
Ambra
The last part of me that is Myshana -- I give to you.
Ambra
Pick its form, and take it with you, Harbinger.
Ambra
It will be on your faith that this world is restored, you must know that.
If I remember the preceding text correctly, the first occurance of the duplicated line might be a mistake.
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Post by Nathan on Jul 20, 2017 3:38:29 GMT -5
Ep4 / Raised Wheel Road
Kjartan
We must fight out way to the center of Ember to confront the followers of the demon Irulik once again.
- We must fight our way to the center of Ember to confront the followers of the demon Irulik once again.
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Post by fallen on Jul 20, 2017 10:37:18 GMT -5
Nathan - you are the man. Major +1s all the time!!! I have fixed all the typos you posted, thank you so much. I hope you are enjoying the game!
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Post by Nathan on Jul 20, 2017 11:22:03 GMT -5
fallen - Thanks, happy to help! Loving the game... wouldn't put this effort in if I didn't. I'm thrilled to finally be getting to the new content, and really enjoying it. I was delayed because I've been comparing different character builds, combinations and game choices and didn't want to lose track of what I was doing, but now I have the group that I'm currently running + 3 others sitting in Freeport.
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Post by Nathan on Jul 21, 2017 3:30:56 GMT -5
Ep4 / Shrine Undercroft
Kjartan
I do . . . Is the sign of the Vrotta Mercenaries.
- I do . . . It is the sign of the Vrotta Mercenaries.
Ep4 / Ember Core
Kjartan
They must be hiding the powerful that are holding up the Deadening Field in this Undercroft.
- They must be hiding the powerful foci that are holding up the Deadening Field in this Undercroft.
(I'm not sure if "foci" is the right word, but it looks like there was supposed to be a word there)
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- They must be hiding the power that is holding up the Deadening Field in this Undercroft.
Kjartan
This is our moment to revenge ourselves, for the people of Ember, for all of Sedolla!
- This is our moment to avenge ourselves, for the people of Ember, for all of Sedolla!
Ep4 / Tower Undercroft (final dialog between Harbingers and Emesai and Raspe, just before the battle)
Tamilin
Your Deadening Field is broken, Emesai.
- Your Deadening Field is broken, Raspe.
...She is responding to Raspe
Emesai
Hreck, hreck! Stay out of the business of Gods, retreat now while you still have your lives.
- the "Hreck, hreck!" is characteristic of Raspe, not Emesai...
Based on these 2 dialog issues, I'm wondering if parts of this dialog have been reversed
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Post by fallen on Jul 22, 2017 15:32:16 GMT -5
Thx, fixed!
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Post by Nathan on Jul 23, 2017 15:32:41 GMT -5
Ep4 / Freeport
Laranda
And it stuck, and spread. The rest of the leaders who rose up in the following years took the same.
- And it stuck, and spread. The rest of the leaders who rose up in the following years took the same title.
The following 2 are more personal preference than actual corrections:
Laranda
It cost her one of her two wings, but she gained the power of foreseeing.
- It cost her one of her two wings, but she gained the power of foresight.
Laranda
After Ellista stole the eye from him, she chose to use it for other feats -- prophecy and foreseeing.
- After Ellista stole the eye from him, she chose to use it for other feats -- prophecy and foresight.
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Post by Nathan on Jul 24, 2017 3:34:55 GMT -5
Ep4 / Great Flats
Vincent
We may not find another such safe waystation for a time.
- We may not find another such safe waystation for a time.
Ep4 / Ocean Gate
Ravenna
Then perhaps . . . I will give them exactly what they thought they want.
- Then perhaps . . . I will give them exactly what they thought they wanted.
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- Then perhaps . . . I will give them exactly what they think they want.
(probably the second option)
Ep4 / Freeport
Larandra
He tried to have his name erased from the history books, the legends.
- He tried to have his name erased from the history books, and legends.
Ep4 / Shrine Undercroft
Kincaid
This room is build like a military barracks.
- This room is built like a military barracks.
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Post by Nathan on Jul 30, 2017 10:36:49 GMT -5
Ep4 / Tower Undercroft
Fyona
Straight to the heart of their evil kingdom. She said to kill a God, you must go into its home.
- Straight to the heart of their evil kingdom. She said to kill a God, you must go into their home.
Ep4 / Freeport
The Crone
Nonetheless, it was unmistakable. My people here have realized that I am more than mortal.
- Nonetheless, it was unmistakable. My people here have realized that I am more than mortal.
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- Nonetheless, it was unmistakable. The people here have realized that I am more than mortal.
The Chrone
Only ask here at the great hall, and your escort will be waiting.
- Only ask here at the great hall, and your escort will be waiting.
Ep4 / Freeport (library) Incorrect character reference
Fyona
What is Happening - Kincaid wants to talk about books?
Vraes is in this group, not Kincaid
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