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Post by Nathan on Apr 19, 2017 19:20:46 GMT -5
Ep1 / Torent Watershed Fyona That moment changes everything. - That moment changed everything.
Ep1 / Dungeon of Red Hill Selen We can rotate watch . . . We can take minute. - We can rotate watch . . . We can take a minute.
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Post by fallen on Apr 19, 2017 21:17:43 GMT -5
Thx, fixed!
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Post by Nathan on Apr 20, 2017 18:47:26 GMT -5
Ep1 / Krellin Deeps
Selen Use my Masterful Disarm Talent and then click on the ground suspected for traps. Watch for patterns on where Ratkin set their traps. - Use my Masterful Disarm Talent and then click on the ground suspected for traps. Watch for patterns on tiles where Ratkin set their traps. OR - Use my Masterful Disarm Talent and then click on the ground suspected for traps. Watch for patterns on where Ratkin set their traps.
Selen A sprung trap is difficult terrain, and moving over it costs 2 AP, while disarmed trap is normal terrain. - A sprung trap is difficult terrain, and moving over it costs 2 AP, while a disarmed trap is normal terrain. OR - A sprung trap is difficult terrain, and moving over it costs 2 AP, while disarmed traps are normal terrain.
Kincaid Perhaps . . . but we must move tactically. The first step is to settle into the inn and get the lay of the land. Then, we have a day or two to decide or next step. - Perhaps . . . but we must move tactically. The first step is to settle into the inn and get the lay of the land. Then, we have a day or two to decide our next step.
Ep1 / Oskahold
Kjartan I understand that Oskahold lays on the south side of the watershed for the River Torrent. - I understand that Oskahold lies on the south side of the watershed of the River Torrent.
Villager (Old woman) It is know that they were buried in the caverns surrounding Oskahold, but the exact location of their tombs is forgotten. - It is known that they were buried in the caverns surrounding Oskahold, but the exact location of their tombs is forgotten.
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Post by fallen on Apr 21, 2017 14:52:34 GMT -5
Thx fixed!
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Post by Nathan on Apr 26, 2017 6:13:23 GMT -5
Now 4.4.1
Ep1 / Temple of the Thirteen
Kyera We did not mean to cause you harm, holy one. We came in search of ancient relic - to prevent a force of evil from capturing it. - We did not mean to cause you harm, holy one. We came in search of an ancient relic - to prevent a force of evil from capturing it.
Ep1 / Excavation Site Kincaid Well, that coward Geraux ran for his mother's skirts. He and the rest of the soldiers are nowhere to be seen. - Well, that coward Geraux ran for his mother's skirt. He and the rest of the soldiers are nowhere to be seen.
BTW: You guys are amazing! - maintain all your games, replying to people on the forums, taking care of the minor fixes, and putting out new content, etc... very, very impressive!
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Post by fallen on Apr 26, 2017 12:20:18 GMT -5
@nathtan - thanks!
I am not sure what the fixes are for either of these typos -- I can't see any difference between the two lines you posted.
I did change, We came in search of an ancient relic
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Post by Nathan on Apr 26, 2017 14:06:41 GMT -5
ya... would have helped if I put them in... sorry I added them in to the post above - the "an" was one of them
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Post by Nathan on May 4, 2017 3:59:52 GMT -5
Now 4.4.3
Ep1 / Captured keep Vraes I give you the advice as a friend, Barnett. Someone else needs to take this job. - I give you this advice as a friend, Barnett. Someone else needs to take this job.
Ep2 / Granthorn first visit Vincent Were there any visitors in town before he disappeared? A man handsome man with startling green eyes? - Were there any visitors in town before he disappeared? A man handsome man, with startling green eyes?
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Post by fallen on May 8, 2017 17:28:04 GMT -5
Thx fixed!
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Post by Nathan on May 11, 2017 3:24:18 GMT -5
Ep2 / Underforge
Vincent -we saw them for the first time when we starting coming east and I knew in my heart that they were unnatural! - -we saw them for the first time when we started coming east and I knew in my heart that they were unnatural!
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Post by fallen on May 11, 2017 11:34:01 GMT -5
Thx fixed! Good catch on that conditional piece of dialog
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Post by Nathan on May 15, 2017 1:43:19 GMT -5
Ep2 / Brunehorn after completing underforge
Knight The City of the Dead holds they keys to restoring out strength and enabling us to lead our people toward a better future. - The City of the Dead holds the keys to restoring out strength and enabling us to lead our people toward a better future.
Knight It's a hike in, and not through the safest territory. Keeping heading south and you will find her in the woods. - It's a hike in, and not through the safest territory. Keep heading south and you will find her in the woods.
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Post by fallen on May 15, 2017 9:58:00 GMT -5
Thx fixed!
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Post by Nathan on May 16, 2017 3:41:32 GMT -5
Ep2 / Ember Lake Outpost
Guard
But that's the old name - Ember. No one uses anymore, because that city is full of the walking dead.
- But that's the old name - Ember. No one uses it anymore, because that city is full of the walking dead.
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Post by fallen on May 17, 2017 10:20:02 GMT -5
Thx fixed.
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